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Post by Yink on Nov 7, 2005 18:13:07 GMT -5
Say the words that please the heart.
They may mean more to someone then you'll ever know.
You cannot run from it,
Hiding does nothing either.
The only thing you have is the person you love,
And the love that they have for you.
Love is everything,
It is the reason we're here and who we are.
Dun dun!
Was it ok?
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Post by contention on Nov 7, 2005 19:35:55 GMT -5
Hey I actually quite liked the way you wrote this poem. Good job, you did it in a nice form of eight lines. Believe me the shorter they are, the harder they are to write. But you did what a poem should, you got your point across in a most beautiful way. Oh how true this poem is to, most wonderful job. May I ask, if you don't mind me asking, what style did you construct this in? Was it just your own little experiment here? I like it, would it be free verse?
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Post by anjilfan on Nov 7, 2005 19:53:00 GMT -5
Cool.I like it.But i don't want to love...........o well.If this poem is right.......then I have no choice..........  |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Nov 7, 2005 21:35:32 GMT -5
Nah, I love love- but I also love this poem. Short and sweet- great job Yink!
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Post by Yink on Nov 8, 2005 18:20:03 GMT -5
Hey I actually quite liked the way you wrote this poem. Good job, you did it in a nice form of eight lines. Believe me the shorter they are, the harder they are to write. But you did what a poem should, you got your point across in a most beautiful way. Oh how true this poem is to, most wonderful job. May I ask, if you don't mind me asking, what style did you construct this in? Was it just your own little experiment here? I like it, would it be free verse? Don't know. I just wrote down how my heart and mind feel. ^^;; That's not a good reason. |
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Post by Yoshifrog on Nov 8, 2005 18:21:01 GMT -5
Yes it is Yink! XD You know that!
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Post by contention on Nov 8, 2005 19:25:29 GMT -5
Thats an awesome reason no worries, and one that I quite enjoy hearing.
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