The Eye of Corruption

[Yink]

Fear and hate are all so bad,
When it happens one turns sad.
All of those who tried to run,
Are now just burning inside the sun.
The good have gone and Evil's here,
Dying is just creeping near.
It can't be stopped so no one tries,
When they die another cries.
So simpley I shall tell you why,
And now you see the Eye of Corruption.

Great job! You're a great poet! (WAAAYY better than me!)

[anjilfan]

He's right.You ARE a great poet!I'm only good in some types of poetry o well.Bravo!!!!

[Yink]

I've learned Rhytem and Meter.

Once you learn that, you learn a lot about peotry. XD

[Yoshifrog]

Yes- I love poetry. When you learn- the words just pop in your head from nowhere,
Nice poem Yink, it is very beautiful, I think you should add more though, pretty short. It has a great meaning to it, I can really grasp it.

Please write more! You're REALLY good!