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Post by Yoshi4ever on Dec 13, 2005 9:52:40 GMT -5
The moon a twilight sickle apon which silence hangs like a lost soul of glass it shatters spreading into the night
The drums of the deep thunder beyond the line of moral sense fire burns incarnate till the day's end
Whispers of the wind calling of the wild a midnight moon with wolf mane of twilight and sharp teeth of endless star howling of sorrow souls beyond the line of reconcile
a sickle of silver light basking all in arcane might call of the moon erging all to pass beyond the golden halls to sing among the lost stars of midnight mane and call of vain
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 13, 2005 14:33:01 GMT -5
Wow... that's really good. It's very well worded. You certainly know to write very well. Good job
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Post by Not-Garr on Dec 13, 2005 16:20:47 GMT -5
Awesome imagery, I got it right in the first read-through, and that's usually hard to do. Perhaps your word choice was a tad confusing, but I did enjoy it anyway! ^.=.^!
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