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A poem
Jan 25, 2006 21:31:24 GMT -5
Post by Yoshifrog on Jan 25, 2006 21:31:24 GMT -5
Which is rare from me actually TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! !
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When one holds back their anger- keeps it hidden deep within They might be burned by their blazing heart Setting fire to all of their common sense Tearing the inners of life apart
But when you let your thoughts escape They might ramble on without meaning Tainting the other’s waiting ear While your eyes glow, lava streaming
When you cage a beast it’s angry, and destroys the things within But when you let it free, what trouble you are in
So what should one do, when the decision arises? To lock your heart within a cage Or set it free, with no care or hope So it can approach the world in rage
What might setting you anger In a place so gentle, so calm That it rests, it slows its pace And can settle in one’s palm
And it will lie there gleaming Like a fresh and bright new star And your eyes will sparkle in a brand new way And you’ll feel like who you really are
Don’t let the beast free in the place that it fears Don’t lock it up, alone Take it to where it truly belongs Take it to its song.
Don’t tell another of your problems Don’t scream them to your broken heart Tell them to the one you trust The one who’s never been apart
The one who’s there when you need him The one who stands true The one who guides us along the way And I think that you know who...
God
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A poem
Jan 27, 2006 22:12:17 GMT -5
Post by Brute on Jan 27, 2006 22:12:17 GMT -5
*sniff* that was beautiful!! =P that is a really neat poem!! I really like how the poem rhymes. I need to start writing on some stuff.
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A poem
Jan 28, 2006 0:27:27 GMT -5
Post by Shoe on Jan 28, 2006 0:27:27 GMT -5
I envy your poetry talent. That was excellent Yoshifrog. I loved it...do you mind if I print this out and show it to my friends at church? Or copy and...wait no...that would be breaking the copyright rule on the board. Nevermind I'll just print it out with your permission. But if not I understand. n.n I like to keep some stuff to myself too even if it is as great as this poem you wrote. It's incredible.
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A poem
Jan 28, 2006 1:34:07 GMT -5
Post by Yoshifrog on Jan 28, 2006 1:34:07 GMT -5
Oh thanks guys ^^
Yeah Ice, do whatever you want with it, I don't care if people use my stuff =)
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A poem
Jan 28, 2006 11:24:16 GMT -5
Post by Leoshi on Jan 28, 2006 11:24:16 GMT -5
Interesting. I see you are quite the poet. This sounds quite well, to say the least! Great job, Yoshifrog!
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