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Post by Brute on Jan 28, 2006 0:27:51 GMT -5
I wrote these Haiku's just to keep my mind busy. Please leave comments. I hope you like them!
“Haiku of Light”
Rays of golden light.
Piercing through the dark, grey clouds.
Heavenly sunshine!
“Haiku of Memories”
Whatever you do...
Do not let the good times fade.
Keep them in your heart.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Jan 31, 2006 17:16:25 GMT -5
Shweet soul-touching haikus, Waterboy!
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Post by Brute on Jan 31, 2006 17:19:50 GMT -5
Thanks, man!
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Post by anjilfan on Jan 31, 2006 22:37:48 GMT -5
Hmmm...wow. Those rock! How long did it take you to think of them?
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Post by Brute on Jan 31, 2006 22:42:29 GMT -5
Up to like 40 minutes. =P
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Post by anjilfan on Jan 31, 2006 22:44:53 GMT -5
No wonder they're so good! Wow!
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Post by Leoshi on Jan 31, 2006 22:46:42 GMT -5
Nice work! Haiku's can be amoung the shortest, but the best of poetic existance there is, that's no lie. Very good work, they are great!
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Post by Brute on Feb 3, 2006 21:00:35 GMT -5
Thanks alot guys!!
I just got through with another haiku! I swear...this one took me like 35 minutes just to do this one!! But I think it's worth it. Here it is.
"Cheer up"
Do not feel alone.
For you are loved by others.
They will cheer you up.
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