Post by Shoe on Jan 29, 2006 0:48:43 GMT -5
It was weird how I wrote it too...I was barely conscience of what I was doing and my fingers just moved. o.o And yeah...okay heres my...story-ish...thing.
A deep chill within my heart. Why does it not leave? What have I done to deserve such torment and suffering. I repeat to myself, "It's just a dream...I'll wake up." It is not so. It grows stronger and stronger from beneath me. The darkness surrounds me. A figure approaches with a cloak and hood, and a long jagged sythe. "What do you want from me?!" I screamed. "What have I done?!" The figure merely pointed to a slumped figure on a dark pathway. I walked to it shaking, then horrified to see what was before me. I gasped...I could not feel air enter my lungs nor leave. I look at my reflection in the puddle of blood. I see what is a stretched out face. One as if it were screaming in pure agony. I jump back and turn to the figure. "Have I passed into another life? Is this what has become of me? How did this happen...I cannot remember." The figure beckoned me. It led me to a gate. A most dreadful looking gate. Corpses laying here and there. Evil spirits moaning and grabbing at me, scratching my face and body. Yet I was protected by the figure. It slashed at the beings with it's mighty weapon. Then led me down a road of pure evil with a demonic presence. I saw nothing but I heard screams. Then all was silent. The figure was standing next to me. I took a step forward but it put out it's sythe to block the way. The ground opened up and sent many spirits and demons up through a hellish crevice. They tryed to drag me into from whence they came only to be crushed as the opening in the ground collapsed. The figure pointed and I looked. I saw a horrifying being sitting on a throne of skulls and carcases. "Why? Why have you taken me here? What does this all mean?" The creature on the throne screamed peercing my very soul and shaking the earth. The figure beckoned me once more as we left this place. "Why have you shown me this..." The figure stopped and turned around. Then spoke, "This is what is to become of you if you do not repent of your sins. If you do not see the light and accept the Lord into your heart." I scanned the groun, confused. The figure had a forgiving voice. Almost harmonic. "Please, let me see who you are." The figure lifted it's hood to reveal a bearded man. He was smiling and his face seemed to glow angelicaly. The darkness left and there was light. Upon his wrists I could see a hole in each. "Who has done this to you I ask?! So that I may smite them for commiting such a horrible crime!" The man smiled and said, "It was not a crime. It was a sacrifice for sinners of the world to be forgiven. So that they may live with me and my father in Heaven. My name is Jesus." I gazed at his face. "Is it too late for me? Am I damned to Hell for all of enternity? Can I still repent my sins?" Darkness crept in once more. I screamed out his name but no answer. I sit up in my hospital bed soaked in sweat. I have been sick for nearly my whole life. I ran my hands through my hair and looked out the window. I then started to cry and repent for my sins. I felt as if a large weight was lifted off of me. I felt at peace. I felt weak. I lay down on the bed once more closing my eyes. I sighed my last breath and died silently. I awoke to find myself in a beatufil paradise. I saw a river as clear as diamond with a large tree with many fruit next to it. I picked the fruit and ate it. It was one of the most incredible experiences I have ever had. Then I saw him again. He was smiling just the same as before. I felt tears stream down my face as he embraced me. I was in Heaven. For all enternity I would live here without pain, sickness, or sadness. All of it which I had for my whole life. I left him to look around. I walked on a road of gold. I saw the most beautiful houses I have ever seen lined across the road. I felt at peace. I noticed a house that I had dreamed of a long time ago. I went inside and it was just the way I had imagined it. I lay down on the bed which was as soft and silky as a kitten. I felt myself fall to sleep with a large smile on my face. I was happy for the first time in my life. I was complete and will be for all eternity.
A deep chill within my heart. Why does it not leave? What have I done to deserve such torment and suffering. I repeat to myself, "It's just a dream...I'll wake up." It is not so. It grows stronger and stronger from beneath me. The darkness surrounds me. A figure approaches with a cloak and hood, and a long jagged sythe. "What do you want from me?!" I screamed. "What have I done?!" The figure merely pointed to a slumped figure on a dark pathway. I walked to it shaking, then horrified to see what was before me. I gasped...I could not feel air enter my lungs nor leave. I look at my reflection in the puddle of blood. I see what is a stretched out face. One as if it were screaming in pure agony. I jump back and turn to the figure. "Have I passed into another life? Is this what has become of me? How did this happen...I cannot remember." The figure beckoned me. It led me to a gate. A most dreadful looking gate. Corpses laying here and there. Evil spirits moaning and grabbing at me, scratching my face and body. Yet I was protected by the figure. It slashed at the beings with it's mighty weapon. Then led me down a road of pure evil with a demonic presence. I saw nothing but I heard screams. Then all was silent. The figure was standing next to me. I took a step forward but it put out it's sythe to block the way. The ground opened up and sent many spirits and demons up through a hellish crevice. They tryed to drag me into from whence they came only to be crushed as the opening in the ground collapsed. The figure pointed and I looked. I saw a horrifying being sitting on a throne of skulls and carcases. "Why? Why have you taken me here? What does this all mean?" The creature on the throne screamed peercing my very soul and shaking the earth. The figure beckoned me once more as we left this place. "Why have you shown me this..." The figure stopped and turned around. Then spoke, "This is what is to become of you if you do not repent of your sins. If you do not see the light and accept the Lord into your heart." I scanned the groun, confused. The figure had a forgiving voice. Almost harmonic. "Please, let me see who you are." The figure lifted it's hood to reveal a bearded man. He was smiling and his face seemed to glow angelicaly. The darkness left and there was light. Upon his wrists I could see a hole in each. "Who has done this to you I ask?! So that I may smite them for commiting such a horrible crime!" The man smiled and said, "It was not a crime. It was a sacrifice for sinners of the world to be forgiven. So that they may live with me and my father in Heaven. My name is Jesus." I gazed at his face. "Is it too late for me? Am I damned to Hell for all of enternity? Can I still repent my sins?" Darkness crept in once more. I screamed out his name but no answer. I sit up in my hospital bed soaked in sweat. I have been sick for nearly my whole life. I ran my hands through my hair and looked out the window. I then started to cry and repent for my sins. I felt as if a large weight was lifted off of me. I felt at peace. I felt weak. I lay down on the bed once more closing my eyes. I sighed my last breath and died silently. I awoke to find myself in a beatufil paradise. I saw a river as clear as diamond with a large tree with many fruit next to it. I picked the fruit and ate it. It was one of the most incredible experiences I have ever had. Then I saw him again. He was smiling just the same as before. I felt tears stream down my face as he embraced me. I was in Heaven. For all enternity I would live here without pain, sickness, or sadness. All of it which I had for my whole life. I left him to look around. I walked on a road of gold. I saw the most beautiful houses I have ever seen lined across the road. I felt at peace. I noticed a house that I had dreamed of a long time ago. I went inside and it was just the way I had imagined it. I lay down on the bed which was as soft and silky as a kitten. I felt myself fall to sleep with a large smile on my face. I was happy for the first time in my life. I was complete and will be for all eternity.
