Hoshi
Yoshi
Emotion!
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Post by Hoshi on Feb 15, 2006 19:17:56 GMT -5
Green, blue, black, and white. Yoshis we are. Together we fight. Through good and bad times, YC has no fear. Together we stand, our buddies are near.The artists, the writers, and the helpers are we. For YC has pride and lots of optimistic glee. The rules are annoying but that is okay, for everyday on YC is a happy day. We spam and we riddicule, but we still work it out. For when I am on YC there is nothing to worry about. YC is the best forum ever. I hope everyone stays active for no forum is better.
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Post by Yoshi4ever on Feb 16, 2006 18:53:26 GMT -5
Interesting and well written. You might want to make it into stanzas- the rhyming and rhythm would stand out more.
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Post by Brute on Feb 16, 2006 22:14:00 GMT -5
Yes!! I like that what you wrote. but yeah you could make it into like 2 or 3 stanzas so the good rhyming can stand out alittle more. But that is great, I like it.
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Hoshi
Yoshi
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Post by Hoshi on Feb 17, 2006 7:26:23 GMT -5
Really?
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Post by anjilfan on Feb 17, 2006 15:48:06 GMT -5
Cool!Pretty neat!
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