Hoshi
Yoshi
Emotion!
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Liars
Feb 17, 2006 17:36:59 GMT -5
Post by Hoshi on Feb 17, 2006 17:36:59 GMT -5
The World is full of lies There I always something that they don't tell you Because of this, cancer patients die Oh what has come of this? Terrorists attack George Bush supposedly has a huge comeback Animal abuse is on the loose People stealing money They think it's really funny The world is full of lies That is why I despise People telling lies.
All around the world they say it's all okay Tsunami's hurricane disasters, tomorrows not today Segrigation, discrimination, it is such a mess People think they have a lot but the have so much less
So if you don't do somthing now, I will go insane Everything may seem alright but it is so contained STOP LYING!
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Feb 17, 2006 18:00:48 GMT -5
Post by Yoshifrog on Feb 17, 2006 18:00:48 GMT -5
It's a great poem, and it rhymes well, but I am not concerned about these most of these things (well terrorists) because I- I don't know. I feel bad for others but I doubt things like this will happen to me. Plus, I don't think they think it's funny- they always have a reason. People steal because tey are desperate for money, people abuse animals mostly because the don't care (sad isn't it?) and terrorists hate us because they are jealous of countries who are successful. No one would steal because it's funny, haha.
But yeah. Despite my own dumb opinions, this is very nice piece, I hope to see more poetry like this from you.
By the way, to keep from flooding you might want to post the rest of your poetry here.
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Hoshi
Yoshi
Emotion!
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Liars
Feb 17, 2006 18:08:14 GMT -5
Post by Hoshi on Feb 17, 2006 18:08:14 GMT -5
Thanks for the tip.
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