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Love
Mar 5, 2006 0:42:40 GMT -5
Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 5, 2006 0:42:40 GMT -5
This was inspired because Contention wrote a poem about love, which he's never done before, and it came out sounding really splendid. And well, frankly love is awesome XD I'm not really proud of this, and didn't spend much time with it, so don't laugh at it XD
------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This love is pulsing through my veins with passion so deep That’s its fiery heat is burning me so But the feel when I imagine your hands in mine Makes the pain’s tight grip let go
I feel so free I feel so calm My heart is living off your presence all the while And you know that just to hear your voice I’d run to you, run every mile
I cannot breathe without your image stationed in my mind I cannot see when you’re not there to fight the dark away I probably couldn’t live, if you went on a vacation Because I’d lose my breath, and lose my strength with each passing day
I wouldn’t care if you stole a million dollars I wouldn’t care if you stole my father’s car It doesn’t matter what you did when I was single Because my love, you’ve taken me so far.
And if something ever came between us I guess I just might die Because my love has one true passion Yes, It needs you to survive. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Love
Mar 5, 2006 1:25:33 GMT -5
Post by Brute on Mar 5, 2006 1:25:33 GMT -5
Wow! *sniff* That was beautiful!! TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! ! I really like the last 4 lines of the poem. Great job!
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Love
Mar 5, 2006 1:28:09 GMT -5
Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 5, 2006 1:28:09 GMT -5
Thanks Brute Force!
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Love
Mar 5, 2006 11:12:24 GMT -5
Post by Yoshiko on Mar 5, 2006 11:12:24 GMT -5
YF, that was wonderful. Seriously, I loved that. ...And as Brute said, the last four lines are really good. I like them. A lot. Double-scoop ice cream Keep up all the good stuff, 'cause it's awesome.
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Love
Mar 5, 2006 18:57:48 GMT -5
Post by Yoshifrog on Mar 5, 2006 18:57:48 GMT -5
Thank you Yoshiko!
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