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Post by yoshark777 on Apr 10, 2006 5:07:48 GMT -5
A Haiku is a Japanese poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 in the third. Its meant to give the reader the same feeling the writer had when he or she wrote it. Here's mine:
Sunset billabong Gleaming waters Silent peace The tranquility
Note: A billabong is a Australian waterhole.
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Post by Brute on Apr 10, 2006 17:56:26 GMT -5
That is a pretty good haiku, Yoshark. I used to write Haiku's, but i dunno why i stopped. I should start writing more haiku's. But yeah...good job there. Can't wait to read more. ;D
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Post by yoshark777 on Apr 13, 2006 7:03:07 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments. Heres another:
When the guns fire The troops are sent to heaven Recall the ANZACs
Inspired by ANZAC day and Battalion Wars.
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