time factory poem

[Gene L.D. Ryoko]

a time factory poem
by L.D. yoshi

one day it was fine
but then lazyness came

the factory gradualy fell
has all the worlds turn to hell

there were a bunch of friends there
they all were pretty funny

the oldest were cid,joshi and contension
the youngest were bandit,ami, naru,and blinx

joshi and blinx were in love
bandit,contension,naru, and cid were their best buddies
ami was blinxes cousin

they all were exeptional artists
they all could be famous
in a kid/teenage mussium

but then people stoped coming
and blinx knew
that the factory would have to go

it is no use caring for a dead place
and she talked to them [sort of] face to face

thankfully supply factories held the worlds
but for how long

the friends could no longer meet
how long till they return to gether

the factory was fallen
but a few of the friends were able to meet
cause of the nerby yoshi forests' village
yoshi's corner

but how long......

made by L.D.
to my friends at the time fatcory

[red.yoshi]

pretty cool stuff l.d.! id like to see more!

[Yoshee&Champ]

Wow.. it's good, L.D. What you could do is space the lines, 3 by 3, so they seem to rhyme a little more. Other than that, it's all good . Kind of sad...

[Gene L.D. Ryoko]

yeah it's sad, and true. 'cept for the worlds to hell and the support factories

i'm talking here a bout the time factory forums in the poem.

my chari is bandit

[Cayoshi]

How depressing.LEVEL UP ! !