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Post by Rackinac on Aug 12, 2006 19:08:08 GMT -5
Change to be hidden Change to stand out Change to be lost Change to be found Never fake Never true I fear of being Me.
Days pass Then weeks A month A year.
Once I favored violet A beautiful color And unique color Then I favored green Natures finest color Full of life After I favored white The purest color If considered A color at all Now I favor orange A rare color to be loved Stands out of the crowd No one knows What color shall be next?
Colors change Faces change Masks hide Feelings adjust.
Once I favored chocolate A sweet taste A smooth texture Then I favored peanut butter The creamy feel Stuck to the roof of my mouth After I favored bubble gum A flavor loved by children All around Now I favor mint The minty fresh feeling Makes you want to smile No one knows What flavor shall be next?
A life of a Chameleon Always changing Confused Lost Alone Hiding Revealing Then there's nothing. Invisible.
Change to be hidden Change to stand out Change to be lost Change to be found Never fake Never true Will I ever find My true colors? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meh, I was never good at poetry, if that is what you can call this. Not much of a description, it speaks for itself.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 12, 2006 19:12:55 GMT -5
It should be a song.
It doesn't really rhyme, but I can feel a beat in there somewhere. Of course, rhyming and keeping a beat is hard, so I congratulate you so far, heh.
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Post by Rackinac on Aug 12, 2006 19:17:41 GMT -5
I prefer writing poems that don't rhyme, but thanks. ^,^ Maybe, maybe I'll change it around to make it rhyme but the chances are somewhere between slim and nothing. D:
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Post by Sirghe on Aug 12, 2006 20:30:02 GMT -5
I like this! It actually fit in with some things going on with me too! I agree with you Gem, free verse is the way to go!
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Post by plebanshiren on Aug 12, 2006 20:42:13 GMT -5
not good??!! man, you trippin i don't come in this section much but i thought I'D have a change and came in here, and look what i find!! pure gold!! This was so lovely to read, short, sweet stansas', and the way you compared those things to change, man this is GOOD!! And i'm 100% with ya, change is gooood.
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Post by Rackinac on Aug 12, 2006 21:00:57 GMT -5
Yes, but is it for the right reasons? :3 To fit in? To be different? Or to be yourself? Meh, I don't know what the hell I'm talking about. ¦P
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Post by plebanshiren on Aug 12, 2006 21:10:43 GMT -5
oh, it's always for the right reasons, for me. i love being unique, other wise if everyone was the same, then the world would be pretty boring.
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