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spiders
Aug 16, 2006 14:38:01 GMT -5
Post by plebanshiren on Aug 16, 2006 14:38:01 GMT -5
The spider is something I truely hate, those eyes that never blink, The clicking of their many legs, And the speed of which they think.
I love the spider I really do, their bodies are so soft, I love their peace and solitued, In basements and in lofts.
I hate the spider I really do, their tenacious webs of death! The way they kill and eat their prey in a second, in one breath.
The spider I love That's what I say, I'll make sure that it is known, They take care of pests so cleanly, and make it a pest free home.
I despise the spider That's my remark, their honed and puncturing jaw, their bite can torture your every nerve, and leave you writhing on the floor.
I adore the spider! I've made up my mind, their looks, I will consider, but they scare my sister half to death, and for THAT I love the spider Double-scoop ice cream ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
A little poem I had to write for school, our task was to make a poem that explains, why we like and dislike a certain animal, or bug, and then make up our mind and say wether we do/ do not like them at the end.....and this is mine.
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spiders
Aug 16, 2006 22:13:43 GMT -5
Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 16, 2006 22:13:43 GMT -5
The fifth quartet, according to my accent, doesn't rhyme, but then I tried reading it with a British accent, and it looked fine.
It has trouble flowing sometimes, but I liked your final descision, hahaha. Good poem.
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