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Post by Rackinac on Aug 27, 2006 11:53:33 GMT -5
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Post by plebanshiren on Aug 27, 2006 15:25:24 GMT -5
Fred? in a public place? Well, I bet it ain't public any more XD You get wierd stuff like that on the back of those poppets boxes and wotsits packets too LEVEL UP ! ! I've only done one of the poppet box ones though..... Any who that was quite an entertaining short story. I'd like to see more^^ (eeeeww kissing LEVEL UP ! ! )
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Post by Rackinac on Aug 27, 2006 20:03:35 GMT -5
*punches Ple* Kissing scenes are cute AND fun to write! Ha, Fred is pretty normal where they live, well, he's a social outcast in the school. People tend to not hang around the messenger of death... then agian, Gem is to thick to know that kissing at school will get you many months of staring... then agian, she doesn't even care. Marko is just her friend, she just wanted to get rid of those 26 calories then rub it in her sisters face that exercise really is for the weak minded. XD Marko will now hide from Gem till his already low social statis is returned. Poor dude having to hang out with my alter ego. *laughs menicingly* More chapters of Mark embarresment coming on! Next one, '15 things to do at Walmart'. I bet you can all see where this is going.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 29, 2006 20:27:20 GMT -5
Kill Wal-Mart, haha.
It made me laugh, at least. Kinda spontaneous, but that's you. Good job so far.
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Post by Brute on Aug 29, 2006 22:49:00 GMT -5
Yes that is very nice work. Cant wait to read more from ya. ^^ (Cute kissing scene by the way.) TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! !
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