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Post by Yoshifrog on Sept 16, 2006 22:19:51 GMT -5
Mkay, this section's kinda vacant so I make up a poem right here right now ^^~
No matter who or what you are Sometimes words can leave a scar Never will your scar be healed Already this has been revealed
She said to him "I love you so" But then he went and let her go Her heart is now a darker red And throbs with all the tears she shed
He said to her "I want you back" But love for him she now did lack She looked at him with pure disgust His throbbing heart was quickly hushed
They both feel sadness deep within He loves her and she loves him But now their fued had left them weak Mad in love but in defeat
Now she lives alone and cries Now he knows he wasn't wise They both live, sad and alone Stuck within two hearts of stone.
~ So sad. I can never write anything happy ]: Just so you know I wrote that in like five minutes, so thats why it sounds like crap. So please don't yell at me D:
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Post by Brute on Sept 18, 2006 14:31:30 GMT -5
That is really neat, Yoshifrog. I guarantee you thats better than what I could come up with in 5 minutes. :3 The rhyming is awesome. Good job on this.
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Post by Yoshifrog on Sept 19, 2006 18:42:11 GMT -5
Thanks ^^
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Post by Kimmorz on Sept 19, 2006 18:52:36 GMT -5
That's way awesome for something written in 5 minutes. I can't even write like that given an hour. Anyways- that is really awesome- I tend to feel like that sometimes. Good job. :3
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Post by Yoshifrog on Sept 19, 2006 19:48:13 GMT -5
Thanks alot c:
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