I Love You, Yet You Hate Me

[Yoshiko]

Everyday, every hour,
I wish I could scour,
Clean away the memories,
That you left so teasingly.
Did you really lead me on?
Or was it love, that fateful song?
Shall I give you all I have?
Or have you taken what I had?
I can't see clearly, it's all a blur,
I honestly wish I'd never met her.
I loved her, I could say I still do.
Is that a lie? Or is it true?
Found with another one,
Burned my soul with my own sun.
I love you, I love you, I swear I do,
Yet am I good enough for you?
You act as if I weren't,
You played with my emotions without concern.
You threw my trust back in my face,
Obviously I wasn't enough to win this race.
Beautiful, lovely, you're more than all of that,
You're perfect, you're absolute, and that's a fact.
A cheery smile from you
Would simply mean the world to me.
To know that I made you happy.
As happy as you could be.
All good things come to an end,
And I say, love is no different, my friend.
Better yet to leave it at all,
Leave it for another in life's pool.
For whoever said "It's better to love and lost that not loved at all..."
Was a fool. And that's all.

Okayokay. Another simply horrible poem from me. (Wow. I spew these things like toxic vapors. With the same effect, even! Is that considered a super power?)
I like how it came together in the beginning and some of the middle, actually. And the last part? Bleh. I don't like it all that much.
I should start keeping count of how many drop dead from my peoms in a row. =D

[Lord of the Dance]

I write worse poetry. I have no delicate finger for that, haha.

It's a decent poem that makes sense in that particular situation. It has a good rhythm if you find it, and it has meaning, which is important.

The rhymes don't sound consistent, though. Your word choice is awesome, but it doesn't quite click together perfectly. Maybe I'm reading it wrong, though, heheh.

[Yoshiko]

Bah. >: Everyone's poetry's gotta be better than mine. XD

It's meant to make sense in that particular situation. Haha. I like meaning, too. Meaning's not meaningless.

I'm sure you're reading it just fine, Yoshee~ Like you say, my rhyming's just off. I've never been too good with it.

[Yoshifrog]

So pretty and so sad~
That poem makes me feel all sad and unhappy inside, but that's obviously what it's meant to do.
Bravo! ^^ You have serious poetry skills my friend :3