Daydream

[Rackinac]

The sky cries for those who can't,
A girl sat through the teachers rant.
Starring at the rainy winter sky,
Dreaming as minutes quickly went by.

Doodling in her school notebook,
Bored as you can tell by her look.
Spirit wandering across the page,
A spirit that will not be locked in a cage.

Pictures of imaginary things take over,
All over the whole book, front to cover.
Teacher ask to hand in your essays,
Being a free spirit does not pay.

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Instead of writing the essay like I was supposed to, I accidentally drew all over the paper with doodles, top to bottom. >> And when we learned about our grades for LA, it turns out poetry and narrative stories are my strong points. Persuassive... Not so much. She said I'm more of a free spirited person, not wanting to be limited to facts. I agreed. TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! ! A little short poem did during the class next day. No, I didn't learn my lesson. DX Kinda choppy at some points. :<

[Yoshifrog]

Before I explain how much I love this, critique TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! !
"A girl sat through the teachers rant.
Starring at the rainy winter sky,
Dreaming as minutes quickly go went by."

Just a changing of tenses is all. :3

Otherwise, the message is cute and funny. And I drift off constantly and start doodling- especially in math where I don't get yelled at because of it. Today I drew a picture that was covered up with aminals and no space was left. T'was fun.
And I love how you can take such an average scene and make it sound deep and pretty, despite its un-deepness :D