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Post by Max "Snow" Andershi on Nov 15, 2006 23:21:20 GMT -5
Yeah, so this thing's been on my mind for the past, I don't know, few months, and since it's
getting close to Sunday, it's getting worse XD So instead of actually paying attention in class
like I should have, I wrote this; enjoy!
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With each passing second The fire inside grows brighter. My body tenses. My stomach tightens.
With each passing second The desire inside grows stronger. To explore new lands. To find new experiences.
With each passing second The wait outside grows harder. For a new beginning. For a new Revolution.
For Wii.
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Does anyone think that I should post this on deviantArt as well? Any comments would be appreciated
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Post by Yoshiko on Nov 15, 2006 23:50:24 GMT -5
Well, bro, one word for you... =3 GEEK! XD You've reached a new level of Geekdom! The epitome of Geek! IT'S TRUE! I MEAN, COME ON!? D:
But it was very nice. Double-scoop ice cream I agree wholeheartedly with it. :3 It had it's own way of flowing, and just... Well, it's about the Wii. That's all that matters. XD
(Boy, that was anticlimactic.)
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Blitzzoshi
Yoshi
Much gratitude, Anjil.
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Post by Blitzzoshi on Dec 5, 2006 20:37:35 GMT -5
Wow, wasn't expecting that ending. Clever.
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csl3
New Yoshi
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Post by csl3 on Dec 6, 2006 7:01:26 GMT -5
That was shocking. Go for it man! I never expected that this poem would end with nintendo Wii.
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