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Post by Max "Snow" Andershi on Jan 3, 2007 15:56:03 GMT -5
This is just something that I wrote up in my second class today during a slow part, but it's dedicated too all my friends that I've met and will meet in the future
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As the new year rings out, I continue on my path, Finding the paths that I can repair.
Any path I come across, Whether flat or bumpy or almost a swamp, Will be one I'll try my hardest to help.
I may not make things too pristine, Or sometimes even make it worse, But I always want to give my all, And am glad to run my path with yours.
My path may not begin anew, But I hope as it continues on, The paths I cross, both old and new, Can lead us on towards happiness.
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May you all have a great new year, and who knows? Perhaps I'll be there near your path someday
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Post by Yoshiko on Jan 3, 2007 16:04:44 GMT -5
Heyyy! Poetry! :3 It seems you used the word "path" a lot, but I'm not sure if that was intentional or whatevro. It's really kind in the way of words, how you phrased things, and I like how it all fits together. Very nice. =D It doesn't necessarily rhyme everywhere, but whoever said poetry has to sucks. >: And wher eit does rhyme, it's very creative and I like it.
G'job, Max. :3
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