two love poems originally for electric

[red.yoshi]

this one was written awhile ago:
running, close behind you, secretly.
quietly, swiftly grabbing you with both arms. embracing you.
fast breathing breaks the night's still silence.
taking you, pinning you against the ground.
fast breathing. i turn you over, hoist you on top of me.
lips meet lips, tounge meets tongue.
happily we kiss in the silent, rainy night.

this one was written about 1 or 2 weeks ago:
we decide to go do somthing together.
somthing romantic...it is a nice after noon
the sun still shines bright
its setting quickly.
i let her climb on my shoulders
she helps me up.
a tree.
we sit on the same branch
feeling the warm breeze against our faces
we hold hands.
we rest, head against head
and watch as the sun paints beautiful colors in the upcoming night's sky.

the second one was like the first uplifting poem i ever wrote.

[Teo]

The first is a little...mushy, but the second I can really picture. I preffer the second, but eh, it's not like I'd get over my nervousness to write one of those.

[red.yoshi]

im very confortable with electric, i guess this is why i can write these things.

[black the white mage]

i like them...
they are wierd poems though, i would consider them kinda like short stories, but ure the artist so...
i like the second 1 along with teo cause i like trees! and its pretty cool otherwise...lol
nice work..
i actually have a couple of my own that i may post on here someday...
keep it up red