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Post by Yoshifrog on Jan 18, 2007 12:15:27 GMT -5
There is a line that doesn't follow the rythem. But it's important that it stays in there anywho TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! ! --------------------------
It’s hard to write poems of being in love When the one that you love doesn’t give any care
It’s hard to write poems of shattering hearts When you’re heart has never yet longed for repair
It’s hard to write poems of hate for him When you know that he is only blind
It’s hard to write poems of moving on When you always feel what you left behind
It’s hard to write poems of love and joy When you feel but a nothing, so numb to it all
Your heart isn’t full but it isn’t yet broken So it sags when it beats, lets go than withdraws
It's hard to write poems of pain and misfortune For hope and despair will not cease to combine
It's hard to write poems of freeness from hurt For still all your veins twist about and combine
So I write about joyfulness, neediness too, of sadness and burning of hearts never used And it helps me to write when I don’t understand, until I have faced it, and faced it first hand.
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Post by Brute on Jan 18, 2007 15:31:22 GMT -5
That line may not be in rhythme with the rest of the poem, but its still a nice poem. Great job, Yoshifrog! ;D
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Post by Yoshifrog on Jan 18, 2007 17:34:23 GMT -5
Thanks TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! !
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Post by Potwin on Jan 22, 2007 14:44:44 GMT -5
I red this about 3 times.
It’s hard to write poems of moving on When you always feel what you left behind
Its so lovely while being so true
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Post by Yoshifrog on Jan 22, 2007 21:17:39 GMT -5
Mthankyou TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! !
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