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Post by Rackinac on May 10, 2007 15:05:59 GMT -5
Red rum in the kitchen Red rum in the dark. Red rum in the hallway Red rum in the park. Red rum at morning Red rum at midnight. Red rum at sunset Red rum at twilight. Red rum at the bar Red rum at the dorm. Red rum at the school Red rum in the storm. Red rum red rum Red rum everywhere. Red rum red rum Red rum is murder. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- I like short poems. It's pretty much about killing/dieing while drunk, because a lot of my family died recently because of it. About... 5 aunts and uncles lost. A virtual hug goes to the one that finds out why I used red rum instead of vodka, wine, whiskey, or beer. Give hugs, not drugs!
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Post by red.yoshi on May 10, 2007 19:40:24 GMT -5
not quite sure why, i'm not a big alcoholic fan D= great poem, and yea, sadly its true. addicts can never put it down. it solves all of their problems. great poem gem, great meaning
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Post by teh yoshi on May 10, 2007 20:01:15 GMT -5
Red rum in the morning, red rum in the evening, red rum at supper time! When red rum's on a bagel, you can serve jail sentence lifetime!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on May 10, 2007 20:55:18 GMT -5
Red rum is murder spelled backwards. My friend creeped me out about a year ago with it XD Wow, not something I'd want to chant at night. Good job with the rhyming. It sounds like something you'd say when you're telling a scary story around a campfire or something >_>
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Post by mecharedyoshi on May 11, 2007 14:36:01 GMT -5
I have to agree with Yoshee. It's creepy, but in a good way.
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Post by Rackinac on May 14, 2007 14:33:06 GMT -5
Thank you~
And yes. My friend creeped me out with the red rum. I was like "lolwtf".
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