Short poem of selfishness and desire.

[red.yoshi]

As I lay down to rest

And fall asleep

My thoughts turn to you

Oh the tears that I weep

What of this day

My thoughts build Towers

Thinking of you

At this lonely hour

How horrible I was

Something wicked I “appeared to be”

Although I’m really not

Its your thoughts, you see

My actions aren’t saviors

As I make mistakes

I’m just an innocent child

Which your heart, I presume, has already replaced

Now I lay

Writing this Note

In my mind you sail far away

With your true love on a beautiful boat

How foolish of me

To have done this to you

For you are my life

And I hoped love was true

If I could go back in time

And read you like a book

Would you take me in?

Would you have a different outlook?

The Gift I desire most

Is a smile on your face

For freedom is your deserved destiny

The perfect Love in my place

I wish I could see you

But one last time

To say “I’m sorry”

For what I did to you is much worse than a crime

I lay here and wonder, how happy you’d be, if I never entered your life, your life to be free….Loyal to you I will forever be…I love you, and I’m sorry. Are those my last words? Or am I drifting to sleep to never see the daybreak more, and never again hear the birds?


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A heartbroken male writing to his female sweetheart, because, you know, no one could build up courage to tell them something like this to their face =P.

How Emo am I to be writing such a work D=. Comments? Critique?

[DanteEX]

Touching. You can just feel the emotion in that poem. That is an example of a A+ poem right there.

[red.yoshi]

Thanks.