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Post by Rackinac on Oct 4, 2007 14:42:44 GMT -5
Love Heart Forever beating Steady and fast Like clockwork Breathing Beating Until time tears Time wears Never stops Tick Tock Back and forth Rhythmic motion Over and over Left Right Goes the pendulum Always moving Always working Thump Thump Goes the heart Always beating Always breathing Scritch Scratch Time has past Worn away old Holding on tight Pitter Pat Goes the gears Spinning, spinning Wearing, wearing Tick Tock Tick Tock Goes the clock Tick... Tock... Tick... Broken Cold Gone forever Old and forgotton Like the gradfatherclock [End] I want a grandfatherclock.
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Post by red.yoshi on Oct 7, 2007 12:35:17 GMT -5
I have one, and it used to belong to my Grandfather =D.
This is an excellent poem! It has a beautiful meaning to it. No matter what happens, life will go on. The clock will always tick. Time waits for no one. I suppose it could also mean time is forgotten too. Time flies by us, and we seem to grow old fast.
Great work Gem!
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