Dreams....

[nate]

Chapter1:The bloody door
Once there was a little boy Named Jack.He loved the internet
and video games.That night,Jack whent to sleep. While
Jack was sleeping,He heard a walking noise.Then the
door started to have blood under it. The walking stoped and
a little girl was by Jack's room door.The blood was coming
closer and closer... The girl was nasty looking. She has
blood all over her skirt and dress.She pulled Her bloody
knife out and stabed Jack.Then the Door became growing
roots that have blood on them.The roots picked up Jack
and choked him even though Jack is dead."AAAAAH!"
Jack screamed when he woke up. It was morning and
Jack whent down stairs to eat. Jacks mom was cooking
Eggs and meat loaf. "Hi honey!"Jack's mom said nicely
to her son."Did you have a good dream?"Jack's mom
said again."Horrible." Jack said. After school, Jack was
back on the internet looking at video games. But when
Jack whent to sleep again,He had another dream.In Jack's
dream,Jack got out of bed,and opened the door that was
bleeding.Nothing. Jack closed the door and ran down stares.

End of chapter1

[Yoshee&Champ]

O.O wow, bad dream. It looks like the beginning of a good story

[nate]

CHAPTER2:The Dog
while Jack was going down staires in his
dream,There was somthing barking...
Then grolwing then barking...
Jack was sweating to death. "Wh-o-o's there?
When Jack took a little peek at the barking
thing,He saw a totally ugly I mean totally
ugly dog! I can't even describe it...
Well anyways,Jack felt like he was going
to die. Then the dog started to chase Jack.
Jack could barely move..Then the dog was
chewing on Jack."AAAAH!' as Jack screamed
again from the frightful nightmare.

End of chapter

Sorry for the sortness

[red.yoshi]

its ok nate, this storys great!