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Post by moshi5694 on Aug 16, 2005 18:54:13 GMT -5
My first Fanfic "I want to see all the newborns,"I said with a smile.I couldn't wait to get my first Poke'mon.They led me down a pitch black hall.In some cages, I can see small and sometimes huge flickering lights.They were proboly Charmanders,Charmeleons,and Charizards.
Meanwhile,in the newborn cage........
"Hey,Kurogi,"Blaze said joyfully."News just in,I'm being adopted by someone called Rage." 'That's a weird name,'Kurogi thought,"Sounds great."^-^Kurogi notices Kenyu."Hey guess what happend,"she said."I got adopted by a person named Raven."At that moment a girl walked in."Alright,line up,"the guard said meanly.The newborns did what he pleased. First in line was a newborn Torchic named Lenny.T_T 'Okay,and I thought my name was weird,'Kurogi thought.He was an okay guy,but he always wanted to be the boss.Kurogi counted 4 others,not including his brother and sister and himself.Next was Kurogi's rival,a shiny charmander named Killer.He always made fun of Kurogi for his size and beat him up on a daily basis.Number 3 was a Pichu named Pika pal.Quite a weird fellow there.After 3 was a beautiful ponyta named Coral.Then two of Kurogi's friends,a Eevee named Megan and another Eevee named Alisia.She saw Kurogi.Someone walked in behind her.......to be continued.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Aug 16, 2005 22:21:07 GMT -5
Oohh, suspenceful! I like it XD I want Pika Pal
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Post by Enrique on Aug 16, 2005 22:45:23 GMT -5
Not bad for a first time, Moshi! Great job!
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Aug 17, 2005 15:37:04 GMT -5
Heheh, Lenny sounds like a silly character. Ansem: IWANTKILLERPLEEZEPLEEZEPLEEZE!!! Hey, get off my computer, jerk!!! *thick Laser Eyes* Pest...
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Post by Yoshifrog on Aug 20, 2005 23:55:40 GMT -5
Pretty cute! Good job!
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Post by Shoe on Aug 21, 2005 10:29:05 GMT -5
I love it! ...i love eevees too...and cashews!!!!!! -steals the two eevees-
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Post by Not-Garr on Aug 22, 2005 20:57:58 GMT -5
Hahaha, though my name in My Leaf Green game is Rage...XD Nice job, yes yes.
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Post by melons on Sept 20, 2005 10:46:34 GMT -5
I love this fan fic its so good! And every one check out my new fic The Blue boo part 2!
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