The Blue Boo Part 3

[melons]

Ok well read number 1 and 2 so u will understand this 1.

Mario: Boo do u got any more pasta
Blue boo:Mario don't be piggish or i forgot u are a pig
Mario: I'M NOT A PIG NOW GET MY PASTA
Blue boo:Well sorry mister PIG! i got no more pasta u ate it all!
Yoshisoul:Stop fighting u to we gotta go save my brother Jayshi!
Mario: But first i want pasta^^
Yoshisoul: Well we gotta go pass my graveyard and i got some pasta there (whispers not)
Mario: ok then!
Blue boo: ok then lets go

(goes outside into graveyard passes graveyard and Lock's the gate!

Mario: What about my pasta!
Yoshisoul:I LIED!
Mario: Then I'm not coming
Yoshisoul:fine then we will leave with out u
Blue boo: Cya later Mario!

So yoshisoul and blueboo go to save Jayshi at the swamp!

Bluboo:Nasty it smells real bad here
Yoshisoul:suck it in princess
Blueboo:What eva Lets find Jayshi
Yoshisoul:There he is!
Blue boo:*runs to jayshi* R u ok Jay?
Fake Jayshi:I am not who u think i am
Yoshisoul:Stop trying to kid around Jasyshi^^
Fake Jayshi: *Hits Yoshisoul with a base ball bat*
Yoshisoul:Oww what was that for Jayshi?
Fake Jayshi:IM NOT JAYSHI IM A FAKE IF U WANT JAYSHI U GOTTA GETT PAST ME!
Blueboo:Well Yoshisoul and i cant fight...
Fake Jayshi:Then i guess u are never going to find Jayshi again.
Voice out of no where: O dont worry we will get Jayshi back!
Fake Jayshi: Who goes there
Voie out of no where: The name is... Mario!
Blueboo:Mario?
Yoshisoul:Mario I didn't think u would come
Mario:well i thought of Jayshi thats y im here
Fake Jayshi:Well bring it mario Charges mario
Mario: *dodges him* fake jasyshi falls in swamp and dies
Yoshisoul:Look theres real Jayshi!
Jayshi:Im so happy to see u guys thank god


So Mario Blue boo and Yoshisoul bring Jayshi home and let him rest... And mario finally got his pasta!

[Jacobthehero]

what?!


I not in The Part 3!

Anyway i give it

8/10!

I Changed my Rating rignt now

[Wildfire the Dragon]

I'm in the story? Sweetness. I didn't expect Yoshisoul being my brother...
Oh, Well. Great Job!

[Yoshifrog]

Good job! Hope you continue it! Can I be in the next one? That would be way cool! XD

[melons]

Sure yoshifrog and Jacob the only reason u werent in it becasue u live with blue boo and the story wasnt at blue boos mainsion.

[Jacobthehero]

<_< ...


if i was not in it

I didnt like it right now

[Yoshifrog]

Ohhh, that's not too nice Jacob! Just because you're not in it doesn't mean it's bad!

[Jacobthehero]

I know


I Dislike when People Left me out of the story and comics

[Lord of the Dance]

I'm not in it, either, but that doesn't stop it from being a cute story ^^. Great job, Melons. I like this chapter. Just watch for typoes. =D

[melons]

Thanks yoshee and i will watch does typoes and Jacob look at every one else they are not mad u gotta stop wineing U might be in the next chapter... And thats a maybe u might not be in it...

[Shoe]

Nice story =D ...but *cough* "[Fire]"?

[Yoshifrog]

XD He's allways liked your name!

[Shoe]

Woah really? Shweet didnt expect that comming XD *works on his maps for his upcoming game* Man this is tiring...but surprisingly fun O:

[melons]

Yup i love ur name and thought i would use fire if that is ok?

[Shoe]

Oh yeah its fine n_n (thats a pretty good avi YF made you =P)

[melons]

I know its AWESOME! I love it so much Yoshifrog is such a good artist

[Yoshifrog]

Awww, thanks Melons!

[Jacobthehero]

*Sigh*


I hate when this happen

[Shoe]

whaddya mean?

[Jacobthehero]

everyone Left me out the Story and Comics


Like in Mario Portals I SO ALONE!

WHY WONT I BE FAMOUS!