The Blue Boo Part 5

[melons]

Well read the other ones so you will understand this one : )



Blue Boo: I Sure miss Soul.
Jayshi: Same here (sighs).
Mario: Listen guys we gotta get our minds off soul how about a game of tennis.
Jayshi: I guess we could have a game
Blue Boo: Na i don't want to play tenis...
Mario: Please Boo!
Blue Boo: Na I am going to soul's grave.
Mario: But you can't it's very dangerous out there.
Blue Boo: To bad Mario I can't stop thinking about him.
Mario: Ok I know this Yoshi named Yoshifrog she can reborn dead Yoshi's!
Jayshi: Well that's great how do we get to her?
Mario: That's the catch you got to defeat the evil Jacobyoshi!
Blue Boo: But Mario that means a nother one of us could die we don't want to take that risk...
Mario: Listen I am the reason Soul died i could have fought Red Boo but i was to hungary so I got to do this it is very important!
Blue Boo: Well.... I guess you could try but T don't want a nother one of my best friends dead... That's all
Jayshi: So let's go fight this Jacobyoshi I heard he was at the achient ruins...
Mario: Corect Jayshi... Umm Can I have a bowl of pasta before we go i am quite hungary!
Blue Boo: You are pointless (Makes pasta gives to Mario)
Mario: Yum I love pasta!

So Mario ate his pasta and they were on the way to the achicent ruins


Jayshi: Man I hate walking.
Mario: Mama mia that was some good pasta!
Blue boo: Mario Shut up!
Mario: Are we there yet?
Blue boo: No.
Mario: Are we there yet?
Blue boo: NO!

Well Mario kept on asking that question and they finally got there.



Mario: Here we are at the achient ruins.
Jacobyoshi: Who goes there?
Mario: Jacob i have came to fight you to get a friend back from the grave.
Jacobyoshi: You think you can beat me and the noise of my guritar
Mario: Sure I can
Jacobyoshi: Well bring it on!
Mario: *shots five fire balls at Jacob*
Jacobyoshi: *blocks* (Hits Mario over the head with guritar)
Mario: owwwww, I can't give up "I got to save SOUL"!
Blue Boo: Here take this it is a power mushroom
Mario: *eats* Turns Five times bigger, who's the big man now shorty
Jacobyoshi: Here the blasting sound of my untuned guirtar:
Mario: *puts in ear plugs* I will just hit you with my 100 fireball attack!
Jacobyoshi: (blocks 10 of them and all of the rest hit him) You are luckily this time Mario but i will be back keep my word!
Blue boo@ Jayshi: YOU DID IT!
Mario: Yes i did (pulls out pasta bowl and eats pasta)

Yoshifrog appears out of no where.
Yoshifrog: Geatings^^
Mario: Hi Yoshifrog!
YoshiFrog: You beat Jacobyoshi good job now what is your wish.
Mario: Umm, I would like my friend soul back from the dead.
Yoshifrog: Sure thing! (poof)





So the gang got their friend Soul back and Mario got ten packs of pasta. XD


See what soul says in part 6... And will Mario eat all of his pasta in one day no one knows...

[Lord of the Dance]

Hehe, that's very cute. ^^ All your stories are pretty good. Just fix up those "Ancient Ruins" and other spelling errors a bit. Also, if they're doing something, you ay not want to just put a comma, then script. Instead of saying,
"*eats* Turns five times bigger, who's the big man now shorty." You could say something like...
*Mario eats the Super Mushroom, then grows five times bigger* Who's the big man now, shorty?

Heh, Mario actually did something smart this time. Lol.

[Enrique]

Funny story Melons/Link Yoshi! I think that you are progressing in your storytelling. Your stories are starting to become more suspenceful and exciting, along with a unique humor element as well. I encourage you to continue. ^^

[anjilfan]

Cool.Great story!Sorry Link that I haven't put you in my story yet.......you'll be in like.....part 5.

[melons]

Thanks everyone! Ra has anyone ever called you from YC?

[anjilfan]

Nope. Lol.O well.It's ok.I don't mind.That sig looks good with you.It dosen't suit me.Lol.

[Jacobyoshi]

Oooooo How come I have to be evil? XD Look at my sig! Is that a yoshi who looks evil?! I don't think so............................... Meanie XD

[Yoshifrog]

Hey, you never told me you finished! ^^ Thanks for including me, great job!

[melons]

Part 6 is coming in the next few days!

[anjilfan]

Cool.WoOt!

[Green Luigi]

Awesome job... Mario is hillrious!

[Jacobthehero]

Oh If you are Luigi, Did u have brother name is Mario?