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Post by Wolf67 on Apr 4, 2008 22:55:13 GMT -5
That subject was very unecspected... Well, at least I'm posting a story here called STORM EMRALD. Storm Emrald, Chapter 1 "Keep moving, pack," I howled. "We'll be at shelter soon!" There was a storm in our terretory. There is a clearing with a cave somewhere here, but where? *trip* *CRASH* "Gees, what did I trip o---" I stopped. There was something green and shiney. Emrald! "No sense wasting it," I yipped. "Star, you pick it up and we'll keep moving." Star replied, "Yes, Wolf." We kept moving. I knew we were heading in the right way, but how much farther could it be? "Wolf," said Racoon. "turn around! we're here!" Racoon was right. "Come on," I said. "Get in. And quick!" I tried to paw with some wood to make a fire, and it worked. There was leftover deer the last time we were here.
Who, that's all for now.
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Post by red.yoshi on Apr 5, 2008 20:58:23 GMT -5
A little confusing since theres really no introduction of characters or descriptions of places. A little short too if I may add ^^;;.
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Post by Wolf67 on Apr 6, 2008 20:24:41 GMT -5
A little confusing since theres really no introduction of characters or descriptions of places. A little short too if I may add ^^;;. Oh, i'm still on cpt. 1...
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