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Post by WildARMsYoshi on Oct 22, 2008 19:15:02 GMT -5
Well, here goes... I did a drawing of the main character of Wild ARMs 3, and I thought I'd post it as my first one here.   Her default name in the game is Virginia Maxwell, although you can change the first name of any character you control. Critique is welcome, hope you guys like it... |
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Post by Sanjo on Oct 23, 2008 20:10:25 GMT -5
The only problem I can see is the face. I don't know about you, but it looks a tiny bit slanted (one ear lower? trying to do a tilted head to one side?) Anyway, I'm not sure what to make of it, but it looks a bit awkward to me.
Other than that, proportions are very accurate, and the details look pretty well thought out! Regardless of my "critic tone", it really is a great drawing! Now if only I can get motivated to draw again... oh well, music and film comes first =P
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Post by WildARMsYoshi on Oct 23, 2008 20:22:19 GMT -5
Dang. I guess I made an EPIC FAIL at trying to make her look a bit sideways. Ah well, I tried. Oh, this was also my first shading attempt. How did I do?
P.S. I'll start making my Yoshi character once I get the four Wild ARMs 3 characters on here. Should I post another character in this topic to save space?
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Post by Sanjo on Oct 23, 2008 20:25:20 GMT -5
You should probably post them in here. That would be less of a headache, I guess.
And you didn't epically fail. I am just a harsh critic. It's sort of what I do in life, being a coach and an umpire most of my time. It really does look great, and the shading was well done, so be proud!
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Post by WildARMsYoshi on Oct 23, 2008 20:30:54 GMT -5
*gasp* A harsh critic?! YAY! You've just become my new best friend. I THRIVE on critique!  Oh, and here's my favorite Wild ARMs 3 character, Jet Enduro.  I want to know why he looks so stiff. Is it his robotic leg-positioning? (This may be off-topic, but W.A.3 is actually NOT a shooting game. It's actually an RPG. Wierd right?) |
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Post by Sanjo on Oct 26, 2008 15:32:47 GMT -5
I would say it's the legs, yeah. I mean, it is a great pose, but if you were looking for something a little more loose, then a little space between the legs and the legs bending so it looks like he's in a stance.
The only other comments I have on this one are the ears (a little too big for my tastes assuming he's a human, especially the one on the left side), and the bullet holder on the left as well (it looks like it's waving due to some action, but there is no indication of why it should be moving. Since this stance is "at rest", shouldn't the belt also be at rest?) Overall, another great job!
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Eddie
Junior Yoshi
Never stop dreamin'
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Post by Eddie on Oct 26, 2008 17:10:22 GMT -5
Cool drawings. Hmm if you want critique I guess the first one is a bit of a slanty-head and the 2nd ones head is a bit big, but yeah they are cool
Nice backgrounds too
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Post by WildARMsYoshi on Oct 27, 2008 17:32:18 GMT -5
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yoshidragon
New Yoshi
hi im part yoshi and part dragon ^.=.^
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Post by yoshidragon on Nov 1, 2008 13:10:41 GMT -5
i always like your art man its not bad its pretty good.
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Post by InNichi Tetsuko on Feb 7, 2009 6:31:25 GMT -5
first pic is good, shading is quality could be a little better, but the eyes are slanted try using a cross line on the head so u can line the eyes right an you'll be fine, as for the second pic the lines are good, legs little to straight but it can be improved, make the left hand a little bigger ,an fix the shading in the background, it looks like the sun is coming up on two diff. sides
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