Shoelaces

[Shoe]

That's right! I've returned to my lonely littly story with a fairly full plot in mind--by which, I mean, I at least know how it ends, and that's really all that matters. I struggled quite a bit with this chapter, and it's seen a few days worth of revisions, but here it is, at last! I hope it's not too talky, but critique is appreciated as always!

You know what? I'm rewriting this chapter. I was too excited and too much in a hurry to post it. I wasn't satisfied even as I submitted it, and now, after reading it again, I regret ever doing so. Besides, it revealed too much too soon. I'll take my time with the next one, but I hope to have it finished by the end of the week. I'm truly terribly sorry to whomever might've already read it!