Otherworldly Mysteries

[Yoshiken]

I definitely like the pictures that you added with the story. I enjoy the plot so far. You definitely caught my attention at the beginning as well.

The dialogue could use a bit of work, but that comes with practice. Keep it up, for I will definitely follow.

[Teal]

The being in the 2nd picture reminds me of Solid Snake for some reason. Nice prologue it made me want to keep reading and the story so far keeps me absorbed. Good details and dialog I'm looking forward to more.