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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 4, 2005 18:32:55 GMT -5
Aight...
The cameras flying high over the edge of a beach in Yoshi's Island. A Fly Guy comes into view. Shows the Bros walking along. The Fly Guy flys to them and says Yoshi found something on a nearby beach. The Bros walk over. Shows area that looks just like 1-2 in the game Yoshi's Island. They walk to the edge of a cliff, look down. See's a few Yoshi's gathered around a small rocky beach. One of them says whats going on. Fill in the blank.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Oct 4, 2005 18:56:46 GMT -5
Blue Yoshi: It's not good! The bad guy troops have returned and are destroying our villages, but they seem darker than usual! I mean, we don't wanna force you, but--
Mario: Don't worry; we always help out! 'Sides, I don't think Peach got kidnapped.
Luigi: Right! Here come the Mario Bros. on another exciting adventure! Hoo-yah!!
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 4, 2005 21:15:11 GMT -5
You know what, forget it. A storm caused the sand in front of the cave to move a rock covering it. The Yoshi's noticed it and brought the Bros.
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Post by yoshicreator on Oct 5, 2005 16:44:36 GMT -5
Well whatever works I guess...hrrrm...I just like massively layered stories!
~*YC*~
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 6, 2005 22:31:03 GMT -5
New new opening scene: Cameras looking up at a cloudy sky, rain falling, moon partly showing. That's the loading screen. When done loading the camera drops still looking up, you hear waves on a beach, louder, LOUDER, splash, sinking in dark water with the moon rays showing. Camera pans down to show the cliff face. Rocks and sand is falling off the cliff underwater. Sand slowly slides down to reveal a rock covering the cave. The rock starts to slide then stops, a sliver of the cave opening is visable. All the while you hear the waves and see moonlight rays gleaming underwater.
Fades out, shows camera moving fast just over the water on a sunny day. Shows title ( still unsettled ), then shows the fly guy and the rest I said.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Oct 7, 2005 19:43:24 GMT -5
New new opening scene: Cameras looking up at a cloudy sky, rain falling, moon partly showing. That's the loading screen. When done loading the camera drops still looking up, you hear waves on a beach, louder, LOUDER, splash, sinking in dark water with the moon rays showing. Camera pans down to show the cliff face. Rocks and sand is falling off the cliff underwater. Sand slowly slides down to reveal a rock covering the cave. The rock starts to slide then stops, a sliver of the cave opening is visable. All the while you hear the waves and see moonlight rays gleaming underwater. Fades out, shows camera moving fast just over the water on a sunny day. Shows title ( still unsettled ), then shows the fly guy and the rest I said. Now, that sounds really cool. I like that idea! |
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 11, 2005 18:27:46 GMT -5
I don't know if I showed this to you guys but meh. Here's my charecters bio:
Name: Not decided, but probably Jetta
Gender: Male
Color: Blue
Alignment: good outlaw
Bio: He tried a failed assanination attempt on Kamek and raiding what's now Rapheals Castle aprx. 50 years ago. He was reffered as a hero for destroying most of the castle and stopping Kameks forces on Yoshi's Island. His leadership skills helped him form a band of rebels and end the war in Dinosaur Land.
Appearence: Heavily wrapped in torn cloth to protect from freezing winds. Two crossing leather straps are around both shoulders and meet in the middle.
Abilitys: No magic. Stealth, swordsminship, and point blank combat.
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 23, 2005 15:37:13 GMT -5
I got an idea for some funny parts...
The heroic music is playing while my charecters running on top of a castles wall. He runs to a tower ( the roof is low enough to climb on ) and as he swings his leg onto the roof the unseen gutter collasps and water falls on him. The music from Pirates of the Caribean ( the part where the chick runs into the room, grabs the sword holder and she can't get the sword out ) would fit perfectly in that part.
*great action theme then creak splash *
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Post by Tempest on Oct 23, 2005 15:42:54 GMT -5
Can you please stop double posting and reviving this dead topic? This hasn't been posted in for days, and you're really the only one that shows interest in it. Just let it die already.
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 23, 2005 17:48:42 GMT -5
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It's been 11 days...
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Post by Tempest on Oct 23, 2005 17:51:47 GMT -5
No, first you posted another post saying, "Anyone got ANYTHING to say about my character?" Or something. I saw it. And you deleted that, and reposted AGAIN, making this a triple post. And exactly - it's been 11 days. And noone has posted, so obviously it's a dying thread.
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Post by Yoshi Master! on Oct 24, 2005 11:10:50 GMT -5
Yeah yeah alright. Kay, thanks to everyone who helped out with this, your comments will be taken to consideration, and good night.
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