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Post by Yoshiken on Feb 21, 2006 18:41:56 GMT -5
*GASP!* another chapter that has hooked me in! XD, You truly know how to set the mood and tone perfectly ^^.
I will send that PM right away! ^^.
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Post by eloeem on Feb 21, 2006 23:32:35 GMT -5
GREAT chapter Leo... lava is in for it now... hehehe...
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Post by Spider_ on Feb 22, 2006 0:24:49 GMT -5
Ooh, nice..another great chapter from you Leo! can't wait for the next one!(well yes i can <_<) but anyways..great job with this too!
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Post by Teo on Feb 22, 2006 4:07:10 GMT -5
So many things that happen... so many things TO happen... oooh I can't take it... make the next chapter!
I still don't know where me, moshi, Enrique, Yoshee, and a few others are in all this though...
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Post by Enrique on Feb 22, 2006 10:36:10 GMT -5
Another really good chapter, Leoshi! I'm eager to see the next one.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Feb 22, 2006 16:53:22 GMT -5
Cantwaitcantwaitcantwaitcantwaitcantwaitcantwait! *cough* Um, yeah.
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 23, 2006 12:14:43 GMT -5
I am back, with the next part at last:
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"The book has to be somewhere down here." Yapi said, leading LD into a hallway.
"...but it can be anywhere on this ship. Do you know it will take without getting some leads?" LD asked.
"We don't have time." Yapi replied.
LD sighed. "But isn't that why we should try to find some hints?"
"...do what you want." Yapi said. "I'll check the lower decks, you check the upper. Okay?"
"Sure." LD replied.
Yapi nodded, then took off. First in a run, then she jumped and let her wings catch the air. She sped down the corridor at the speed of a gale and vanished quickly behind a corner.
LD sighed, and reached for the first door to his left. His hand reached the knob. He slowly turned the knob, and let the door slowly creak open.
There was nothing inside as far as he could see, except for darkness.
LD walked further in and reached into his hat. Using a cell phone he had stashed underneath it, he flipped it open and turned on it's light.
LD gasped at what lay hidden inside the room. Gold bars lined the floors and walls. It was filled with crates, barrels and chests, all filled with gems and jewels.
His mouth opened up wide, as his skateboard fell with a clang on the golden floor.
"The treasure room... I'm rich." he said, first with dis-belief. A the clock ticked, a huge grin appeared on his face. "I'm rich!"
He took his cell phone and switched on a ring tone. Placing it on the floor, LD began to dance, forgetting all about the fact that he left the door wide open.
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Enrique held the ship's wheel tight. All of the chaos that was occurring up on deck was make it very hard to hold the ship in place.
There was a quick rumbling sound, followed by a mini-earthquake. The sounds of weapons crashing could be heard, as well as the ocean waves crashing on the two ships with every little explosion above.
"...how much longer do you think we can keep this up?" John asked.
"We have to do it." Enrique said, straining to keep the wheel. From behind them, a little bit of dust fell from the ceiling as the battle continued.
"Besides, we can defend him if they get down here." Teo said, nudging toward John and Eloeem.
From the end of the room, one of the doors suddenly burst open. A mean looking one from the other side lowered his foot, satisfied with his kick.
"...it's him." John said.
It was the principal, standing there. He gave them annoyed looks. He smugly fixed his tie as he walked toward them.
"...at last, I caught up to you. Attacking me..." he pointed to John, who gasped. "Damaging school property." he pointed to Teo. "And skipping school." His last point went to Enrique, who failed to notice because he was too focused on keep the wheel steady.
"We need to protect the Majestua, at all costs." Teo said. "...but this room is too small for me to become a dragon."
"The controls in here and fragile." John added.
"...so, I guess we need to be careful." Eloeem said.
He drew his two swords, as John and Teo held up their fists.
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Lava didn't want to look back, though he realized who it was when he heard his voice.
"...Demon. So nice of you to come back." Lava said.
"I wish I could say the same for you." Demon said.
"HIYA!"
Treyba's battle cry was soon followed by the sounds of struggling. Lava found a break an released himself from Demon's grasp. He turned and saw his three friends, struggling to keep Demon restrained.
In the meantime, Lava revealed his key-blade. Without much time to react before Demon would free himself, he took the key and slammed it into the prison door. The door broke open due to the force. he watched as the two prisoners slowly began to awaken.
In a quiet voice one of them asked: "...what is the world is going on?"
"Well, we-" Lava was interrupted as a hand abruptly pulled him back into his battle.
Lava twisted as he walked, until he used his key-blade to intercept Demon's sneak attack.
Velvet T pulled out a small weapon that appeared to be a gun of sorts. She fired it and sent a clear shot right at Demon. However, he simply arose his kunei knife and deflected the projectile.
"...no way." She replied.
Lava ran ahead, taking his key-blade and slamming it into Demon's side. Again, this blow was deflected by a simple swish of his knife.
"He's got unmatched blocking skills with his knives and a ton of knives to spare. Our best bet is to disarm him. he doesn't appear to be much with his weapons." Fantasy guy said, as he observed his movements.
All of the while, the two prisoners looked at each other.
"...how did I get here?" the taller, more fearsome looking one asked.
<Not sure.> the smaller one thought.
"Whoa, you can telepathically talk?" the taller asked.
<Yes. I am a chao after all.> The smaller one said. <You may call me Charon. You are...>
"My name is Jay Tanoshi. You may call me Jay, if you want." the taller one said.
<Ah, a dragon.> Charon said. <...now that that's settled, do you have any idea just how we got in this place?>
"Not a clue." Jay said. "One minute, I'm flying over a city, then the next, I am here."
<I was with a friend of mine. I can't explain how, but I ended up trapped here.> Charon said.
Jay looked up, to spot the battle going on outside of his cell.
"We need to do something." Jay said.
<But we don't even know if they are good or evil.> Charon added.
"That one over there..." Jay said, gesturing to the one with the key-blade. "...he freed us from the cell. We should help."
<Works for me.> Charon said. The two of them slowly got up, then rushed into the fray.
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John rushed ahead first, running toward the principal.
"Just like old times." the principal said. Before John could even emit as much as a swing of a fist, the principal grabbed his arm, an twisted it. John let out a yell of agony.
In this mess, John quickly spun, and made the principal release his grip. In that instant, John swung another fist. This one made a clear connection right on th principal's face.
"Right on, nice punch." Teo said, cheering on his friend.
However, John sudden gave out a shout. In the next instant, he was spinning on the wooden floor. he gave one last sigh and gave up the fight.
Teo gasped, then ran toward the principal.
"...what are you going to do?" the principal taunted.
Teo growled and let his eyes turn into his dragon's eyes, with huge teeth coming from his mouth.
The principal gasped.
"Unless you want me to complete my transformation, I suggest you leave now. Teo said, with both fists out.
"Do the math, there isn't enough room in here. Then again, you never where that good at math." the principal said.
"What are you talking about?" Teo asked, making his face return to normal. "...I am a great-"
How was quickly interrupted as he skidded on the floor from the principal's fists.
"Speaking of math, I believe you are next in line, Enrique." the principal said.
Enrique still hadn't noticed, he was too busy holding the ship's wheel.
"No, I am." Eloeem said.
It was the first time the principal realized there was a fifth person in the room. "Who the heck are you?"
Eloeem held up his swords. "I may not be that strong, but I know I got to keep you from beating us."
"So, you think you are a tough guy?" the principal asked.
"I know I am not strong." Eloeem said. "But I'm fast, and for now, that's all it will take. I don't condone violence, but I know that this entire mission rests on the protection of the Majestusa."
"...well then, shall be begin our duel?" the principal asked.
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I swear I'll have more of Yoshee, Champ, Yin, and Moshi in the next one. I will get it done as soon as I can
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Post by Enrique on Feb 23, 2006 15:28:23 GMT -5
Ooh... suspence... Nice job on this chapter, Leo! I see a big fight about to happen!
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Post by Spider_ on Feb 23, 2006 15:54:24 GMT -5
Nice one again Leoshi! im getting ideas about drawing some moments from this story!
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Feb 23, 2006 15:58:00 GMT -5
Time to kick some Demon tail! Haha! You're really good at this stuff! Keep it up man!
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Feb 23, 2006 16:34:10 GMT -5
Whoo!!! Good chapter! So can't wait! And actually, the gun thing is some sort of arm cannon like Samus Aran's.
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Feb 23, 2006 16:37:12 GMT -5
YAHOO I'M RICH MWHAHAHAHAHA *puts cellphone on the ground again,sets it twords a ring tone and dances some more* one of my favorite chapters,because of what I do
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Feb 23, 2006 22:04:58 GMT -5
XD Awesome chapter, what with all the chaos. *dances* Yay, Charon made his appearance ^^ Now the suspence is getting at me. Dernit, haha.
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Post by Teo on Feb 23, 2006 23:34:24 GMT -5
Uh oh, the principal is back... that can only mean trouble! I don't know what's going to come next, I only hope that it will... keep it up Leo, you're on a roll!
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Post by Midnight on Feb 25, 2006 10:04:16 GMT -5
Whoa! Fighting the principal! Ooh,have I always wanted to...Never mind,please continue. XD
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Post by moshi on Feb 26, 2006 13:21:22 GMT -5
I am in like none of these chapters. I am missing some kick but action! NEVARRRR!!! *runs with knife at random people* Whoops..... The cliff hangers are wow, the action is wow, the whole THING is wow...... MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEE!!!!
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 26, 2006 14:16:17 GMT -5
Sorry, Moshi. I think this next one should satisfy your desire:
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"I'm sick of waiting..." Moshi said, leaning on the rails of the Majestusa with her arms folded.
"We're supposed to be following orders." Yin said.
'I follow my own orders." Moshi replied.
"Then why did you even come with us?" Yin asked.
"...that book." Moshi said.
"You aren't getting that book." Yin said. 'Give it a rest."
"Why are you so interested in that book anyway?" Yoshee asked.
Moshi sighed and said nothing else.
Champ, who was in flight, landed beside Yoshee in a quick hurry. <Hurry, those dry bones pirates are boarding!>
Moshi laughed and cracked her knuckles. "It's about time."
The four of them stood in a fighting position, ready to attack.
From above them, they could see a swarm of pirates flying in on ropes.
"That's right, come on." Moshi said.
The first five of the pirates landed on the deck. Moshi immediately sprung into action. she slashed at the first one, then the second. The remaining three drew blades. Moshi jumped and on the returning fall, kicked two of them. The third one swung his sword, but Yin's quick thinking of throwing a blade stopped the attack.
"Moshi, you need to pay attention!" Yin shouted.
"...huh, what?" She replied.
Yin ran ahead next, jumping over Moshi as she did. She struck another on-coming wave of pirates. They let out screams before disintegrating.
"These guys are like zombies." Moshi said. "They don't even react in agility."
"Who cares, let's just end this." Yoshee said. She ran ahead next, directing Champ to follow closely behind. She revealed a tennis racket and took out a tennis ball.
"Yoshee, are you serious?!" Moshi asked.
Yoshee threw the ball in the air, then struck it with the racket. The ball soared in the air, and stuck right on one of the pirate's blade.
"...way to go." Moshi said.
Yin laughed. She reached into her pockets and pulled out a remote with a single button on it. "Night-night."
With a single, swift movement, Yoshee pushed the button.
BOOOOOOOMM!!!
The bones shattered and flew everywhere with the quick explosion.
Yoshee, looking satisfied, looked back at Yin and Moshi, who where stunned.
"...Enrique designed it." Yoshee said.
"Can I have one?" Yin asked.
"Ask Enrique, I only have two of these left." Yoshee said.
Suddenly, Yapi flew up on the deck.
"Yapi, what's going on?" Yoshee asked.
<Shouldn't you be with Yoshiken, Leo, and LD?> Champ asked.
"Leoshi's down... Yoshiken's in a duel, and I think I lost LD." Yapi said, breathing heavily.
"...great." Moshi said, with her hands folded. "Way to go."
"...sorry." Yapi said. "...what's worse is that the book is missing. I think the pirates have it."
"Really?" Moshi asked. A small smirk crossed her face. "...then let's go find it, now!"
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Yoshiken growled and swung another blow at Charfg, who merely laughed and dodged the swing.
Yoshiken landed on his feet and stopped.
By now, he was tired, breathing heavily, covered with sweat and slightly beaten up.
Charfg, on the other hand, was still willing and able to fight.
"Are you wearing out?" Charfg asked.
"Never..." Yoshiken said. "I can take you on, I know it."
"...is that so, pirate hunter?" Charfg asked.
"I'm know it." Yoshiken said, pointing his katana right at Charfg. "...You can't defeat me."
"I will, I know it..." Charfg said. He charged up ahead, rushing Yoshiken.
The fire-dragon-yoshi jumped into the air and took flight, only to have a hand grab his foot. Yoshiken was thrown back down onto the decks of the enemy ship. Yoshiken was pinned down.
By now, he was too exhausted to summon more fire. He gave a sigh and slowly loosened his grip on his katana. Charfg laughed and kicked his arm, causing the blade of fire to spiral out of his hands.
Yoshiken gasped, eyes widening. Charfg laughed, and held up his blade. Yoshiken closed his eyes.
"Make it quick." Yoshiken said.
"...no, I'll make it slow!" Charfg said. he laughed and gave a slash.
Yoshiken let out a scream as the slash left a scratch on his chest.
"...so, what's it feel like?" Charfg asked. "To know that this is the end of it all? You shall never see your dear brother again... and your parents, they will remain forever lost... because I'll finish you right here. Say goodbye forever, to your hopes and dreams."
He was ready to swing again, when Yoshiken suddenly grabbed his arm. Charfg gasped and tried to swing, but Yoshiken was too strong.
Charfg looked into Yoshiken's eyes. What he saw, he found disturbing. The look in his eyes was of fierce determination, anger, and a strong lust for vengeance.
He instantly knew his mistake, but it was sealed.
"...nobody talked about my family that way." Yoshiken said.
Yoshiken growled and threw Charfg onto the decks. Before Charfg could react, Yoshiken shouted and punched Charfg. Forgetting his blade all together, Yoshiken punched charfg again and again, forcing him closer and closer to the edge of the ship.
Charfg continued to back off until he hit the railing. he gasped and looked back up at Yoshiken. He could see the flare in his eyes, which seemed to be transferring to his fist, which was aglow with red flames.
"...No, stop!" Charfg shouted.
Yoshiken screamed and swung his flaming fist right at Charfg terrified face...
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"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"
Leoshi heard a loud scream and slowly began to awaken. The first thing that he saw was a raging fire that had appeared on the top of the ship.
Everyone else was gone.
"...what happened?" he asked.
Leo gave a blink, still too weak to get up. His head turned in pain as he looked around, searching for anyone. He could see the fire, and the Majestua along the enemy ship, but nothing else.
His sweatshirt was completely ruined, scratched and scrapped so much that is had become nothing more then a rag. His shoes where also destroyed, and his glasses where shattered.
"...I can barley see... I can't move... and my cloths are destroied... and they left me here." Leo said.
He groaned, trying to reach for the book... but wait...
"...my book." Leoshi said. "It's... gone..." he was still to weak to get up. "...I failed."
He put his face back down on the ground and close his eyes...
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That's for now. I'll get back to the other battles later on
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Post by moshi on Feb 26, 2006 14:19:22 GMT -5
Wheeeeeeeeeee!!! Moshi back in action! WOOO!!! Can't wait till the next chapter!
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Post by Spider_ on Feb 26, 2006 14:45:32 GMT -5
Woah again nice chapter Leo! (nobody talks about yoshiken's family like that! xD)
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Post by Enrique on Feb 26, 2006 15:37:38 GMT -5
Another great chapter, Leo! This story is definately taking a twist with the vanishing of the book.
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