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Post by UMS Author Lava on Apr 5, 2006 7:15:18 GMT -5
Super-shweet battle clips! "My tine is spingling!" (-- Mario, "Wario Comix")
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Post by yoshark777 on Apr 5, 2006 17:03:43 GMT -5
BOOM! That's one big explosion!
Can't wait for the next bit!
By the way... I know your overloaded with people but *looks down at feet* Can my character Yoshark be in it? My avatar is a pic of him.
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Post by Yin on Apr 5, 2006 18:24:28 GMT -5
Sorry for replying so late. I'm just so lazy and groggy from loosing one hour of sleep from Day-light savings. LEVEL UP ! ! Anyways great chapters! And I must make another Good or Evil to Anime deduction, Leo turning into a kid is like Jimmy (for Case Closed) turning into a kid after the poison. LEVEL UP ! ! Well, keep up the good work!
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Post by Leoshi on Apr 5, 2006 18:49:16 GMT -5
Yes, Yoshark can be in it. Ok, so Midnight, Shez, and Yoshark are comming. I don't know whether or not I'll have to wait another arc to make their appearances, but with any luck, I'll get it done sooner. Darn it, I may have to wait until tommorow to post the next. Thanks alot for the compliments though, and I'll get more done as soon as I can.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Apr 6, 2006 7:03:22 GMT -5
You...mentioned that Ansem would be sometime in this arc, right?
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Apr 6, 2006 16:17:26 GMT -5
chances are that it will be later,psi hasn't shown up yet.
good story,the principle got pwned
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Post by Leoshi on Apr 6, 2006 17:34:14 GMT -5
Yes Lava, Ansem’s coming. I just didn’t want to bring all the villains in at once. Alright, here’s my next:
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Yoshiken’s own blade struck Demon’s knife. Demon gave a laugh as he countered the strike with a strong swipe of a kunei knife. Demon let his free hand fall on the sandy ground. Using it as a base, Demon threw himself into a frontward flip. As he did, both of his spiked shoes rose into the air. His left leg held back, but his right one, with a boot made with a spiked soul, flew directly toward Yoshiken. The red Yoshi held up his own katana with both hands and shielded himself from the blast. Demon’s other leg suddenly flew in. Yoshiken dodged to the right and left the leg fly by. Demon jumped back upright, then held out a group of small shurikens. He threw them all and let them fly past. Yoshiken swiped his katana only once, slicing all of the smaller shurikens into pieces.
“Aha.” Demon said, adjusting his bandana. “True to your legacy, you are indeed a though enemy.”
A smirk of confidence crossed Yoshiken’s face. “Are you done yet?”
“Not quite, my friend.” Demon said, wearing an equally confident expression.
Both of them rushed again, headed directly for one another.
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“You know, you remind me of someone.” Ambioshi said, brushing her blonde hair back.
Leoshi gasped. “…you may have known me before.”
“You remind me of a guy who came here a little while ago.” She said. She leaned back in her wooden chair as the two of them awaited in her house.
There was a bit of silence.
“In fact, I think I knew a kid who looks just like you when I was your age.” She said.
Leoshi looked down, clearly knowing what she was talking about. “…maybe.”
“…he was certainly a poor kid.” Ambioshi said. “Have you heard of a Yoshi who used to live here? Leoshi?” She asked.
Leo clutched his tiny fists. “…uh, no.”
“Ah, that kid certainly was a sad one. I remember him. Yup, he was hatched here on this very island, Airway Isle. I heard rumors that his egg was somehow separated from his parents before he hatched. They say that somehow, some twisted crook found his egg. Of course, instead of returning it, the guy stole it, without knowing it was going to hatch.”
Leoshi turned his back. “…”
“Something wrong?” She asked.
Leo didn’t want to blow his cover. “…no. Go on.” he said.
“Ok… so then, you can just imagine that criminal’s face when he found a baby Yoshi among his spoils. Now, you think the sight of a baby would make him want to bring his back to where he belonged, right?” She closed her eyes and leaned back farther in her chair.
“Nope.” She said. “Not this twisted jerk. He decided to keep the yoshi, and train him to work around his mansion. You see, he used to have a mansion here in town, but nobody knew he was a criminal, so he was able to stay public. He always hid Leoshi inside his house and made him do stuff.”
Leo closed his eyes. He was doing everything within himself just to keep himself from saying something.
“The somehow, the criminal just fled, a group of travelers took him away from the island. He hasn’t been back until now>“ Ambioshi said.
Leo looked down, facing the other way.
“Something wrong?” She asked, peering over toward him.
“……..I think that battle outside is over.” Leo said. “…I want to leave now.”
“No way, kid.” She said. “There’s no way I’m letting someone so young leave walk out there alone.”
“Leave me alone.” he said. “I want to leave, now.”
“Ok.” She said. “But I’m coming too.”
Leo looked back. “Fine.” he said.
He walked out of the door, letting her follow behind. As they walked through the door, they saw the abandoned streets.
“Wait, before we go.” She said. She reached underneath the mat of her door and pulled out a key. She locked the front door to her house.
“Don’t want anyone taking my treasure.” She said.
“Treasure?” Leo asked. “What’s what?”
She pointed to the roof of her building. Leo looked up and caught a glimpse of a huge stature of a Yoshi head. It was of a green yoshi and red spikes, and a smile. The head must have been the size of an adult yoshi. It rested at the top of her house, looking into the city.
“Whoa, where’d you get that?” Leoshi asked.
“I made it myself. You see, my mom had a gem that was said to be very valuable, and she asked me to hide it. So, I built a statue of a Yoshi’s head to hide it in. People think it’s a common ornament, when it’s actually a treasure chest pf sorts!” she said. “Um, but don’t tell anyone.”
Leoshi nodded. “I wonder.” he thought. “Could the gem she has have something to do with the curse of this island? It’s said something around here can break the curse, and something guarded that valuably must have some sort of correlation. I’ll have to find the others to make sure.”
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“Uh, this is impossible.” LD said.
“That might be true.” Spider added. “I’m worried there isn’t enough supplies here to make anything airworthy.”
“I guess not.” Enrique said.
“Sorry to disappoint you all.” Parakoop said. “All we can afford to build are a pair of huge wings, but because of that fact that nothing can fly, we’re all grounded.”
“No way.” Yin said. “We should build those wings anyway.”
“What’s the point of building wings if we cant make a craft?” Moshi asked.
“All we need are the wings.” Yin said. “Then we can try to make a glider. All we need is wind, really.”
“…it will take us a while, and do you realize what will happen if we fail and fall?” Jay asked.
“And what will happen if we don’t try?” Yoshee replied. “I say we do it.”
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Yoshiko sheathes his sword, as the rest of the group was talking with each other.
“So then, now what?” Eloeem asked.
“We got to go and find where the principal is!” Lava shouted. “I won’t let that jerk keep my friends.”
“And we got to regroup with the others and find a way up in the air.” Yapi said. “If we ever want to save the world.”
“Hey, check it out.” Teo said. “Someone’s coming.”
The group tilted their heads and spotted a small, child Yoshi walking toward them with an older female behind him.
“Who the heck are they?” Yoshifrog asked.
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That’s all, for a sadly short chapter. Sorry, more coming soon.
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Post by eloeem on Apr 6, 2006 22:11:51 GMT -5
YEA... COOL chapter ^^ keep this upp, I see it's going to be interesting ^^
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Apr 7, 2006 7:11:48 GMT -5
So THAT'S what happened in Leoshi's past. How sad  ... |
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Post by shez on Apr 7, 2006 10:36:33 GMT -5
Cool part ;D It's getting v interesting! Thanks for letting me in soon too ^^
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Post by yoshark777 on Apr 7, 2006 18:05:50 GMT -5
Awesome chapter again! I'm excited that I'm going to show up soon! ;D
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Post by Leoshi on Apr 7, 2006 21:40:13 GMT -5
Like I said though, it may not be for a while, and I might not be able to gauruntee an appearance until the next arc comes, only because spots are really right, and it's getting increasingly harder to manage so many characters at a time. More is comming as soon as I can manage to overcome the evil that is writer's block.
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Post by Yoshiken on Apr 7, 2006 21:46:26 GMT -5
give Leo a break people, its not like hes superman or something XD. You guys are pushing him to add your characters too much. just have patience XD!
Gasp! look at mah katana skillz XD, You made all the fight scenes sound realistic XD. I loved it!
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Post by yoshark777 on Apr 8, 2006 1:20:08 GMT -5
Yoshiken wrote: You guys are pushing him to add your characters too much. just have patience XD!
Sorry... I won't be like that again...
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Post by moshi on Apr 8, 2006 8:13:44 GMT -5
Cool! And I thought Moshi was the only one who had a bad past...
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Post by Yoshiken on Apr 8, 2006 14:10:39 GMT -5
dont worry Yoshark, I aint mad at all XD, Im just being informative ^^
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Post by Teo on Apr 8, 2006 14:48:10 GMT -5
There's so many characters... might as well make an army! You'd need two writers to describe all the characters and what they do daily!! It must be getting tough for Leoshi... Bleh, take your time, you decide anyhow  |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Apr 9, 2006 11:02:20 GMT -5
Muahahaha, we're building a plane! Sweet!
Great job on these chapters, Leo. I can't wait for the next one. But your past is kinda sad...
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Hunter
New Yoshi
I need a Yoshi form D=
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Post by Hunter on Apr 9, 2006 15:46:38 GMT -5
The grammar is awesome. The sentences filled my mind with everything you described in this story. and it's just a perfect story! I love it!
Your story has to be one of my favorite stories in the world, Leoshi! I'm still reading at the beginning, but so far, I'm already loving it. It might take me a while to read this. I just now noticed how many pages there are TRIPLE BONUS MULTIPLIER ! !!
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Post by Leoshi on Apr 9, 2006 22:57:08 GMT -5
Thanks, though to be honest, I am afraid I have a bit of trouble now.
It's writer's block, now combined with the fact that recent events have led me to discover a very serious hole in the plot of my story. In order to get around that, I need to think about how I am going to continue this fanfic. I have no idea when I will post another new one, but hopefully very soon.
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