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Post by yoshark777 on Apr 26, 2006 20:03:06 GMT -5
Oh, that's to bad. Well I hope everything is going to be alright. Good luck!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Apr 26, 2006 22:49:30 GMT -5
Aw, man...
Take your time, Leo. Don't get in trouble because of our addiction to your fan fiction XD
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Post by Teo on Apr 26, 2006 22:54:52 GMT -5
^Someone's feeling poetic... though you tend to do that a lot... pessimistic optimistic comes to mind XD
Well, I see where it gets to the part of writers block. The characters seem to be doing the same thing, too many characters to handle, and maybe a lack of seeing how it will turn out. This is how my fics end, I can't imagine the next scene anymore...
Well, if you decide to quit or continue, all I can say is that you've done a GREAT job so far, and congratulations.
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Apr 27, 2006 8:11:30 GMT -5
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!  I hope you get your writers' block over with soon... |
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Post by Leoshi on Apr 27, 2006 12:01:28 GMT -5
No, I mean, it's not writer's block, I know exactly what to do next. It's more along the lines of school stuff. I'm just too overworked to keep writing for the time being. I'll write again provided I get the time.
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Post by Teo on Apr 27, 2006 19:00:04 GMT -5
*Whew.* Writers block is the worst, although school is just as bad for you. No wait, what am I saying? School is the worst! Go ahead and take your time, a good story comes with time.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Apr 27, 2006 21:25:15 GMT -5
I'm an optomistic pessimist. XD
Well, Leo, take your time with school. I like school, because I'm learning what makes an interesting story and how to put it together currently. School first! ^^
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Post by Yoshiken on Apr 28, 2006 9:24:44 GMT -5
well, your fan fic will dearly be missed but responsibilities in the realm of reality must always come first ^^. Its perfectly understandable, I hope you do well with your school stuff.
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Katrina
New Yoshi
I love lions!
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Post by Katrina on May 1, 2006 17:38:44 GMT -5
Can I be in the fic?
Name: Alex
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Music: Rap
Hobbies: Sing, Draw.
Bio: Since 9, he wanted to be a rap star. Now he is one.
Pic:
(In Avatar and Sig)
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Post by Teo on May 2, 2006 0:23:53 GMT -5
Alex... hate to break it to you... but this story is possibly discontinued.
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Post by Leoshi on May 2, 2006 15:56:51 GMT -5
Alright, I did manage to get this quick chapter in, so as of right now, it’s not going to be discontinued (but still, it may take a while to get more chapters in because I have been so darned busy.) Ok, Alex, I’ll add you to the list of people to be added. Right, let’s sort that out for a bit:
The Shez
Midnight
Yoshiark
Alex
These 4 characters are on the way, and they will appear next arc, simply because it’s a little to far into this one. So if you can wait a few more chapters, it’ll come to pass.
Ok, now for the real thing, my next chapter:
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The night sky had now cast it shadow over the island. The group that was still in the mansion were now officially lost in it’s decaying halls, and not the leas bit happy about it.
“…well, this is fun.” Teo said.
“Ok, it’s safe to say that we’ve been messed up the second we came in here.” Yoshifrog said, looking to and fro.
“Let’s just hurry up, find that kid and that flying thing that this criminal guy has, and let’s get the heck out of here.” Lava said.
“Sooner better then later.” Yapi said. “Lava, your friends’ pulses are getting weaker.”
“…you know, there’s something really weird going on.” Yoshiken said. “Earlier, Demon just vanished in the middle of our fight. I have a feeling he’s playing head games.”
“How so?” Eloeem asked.
“Well, to be honest, I get the sensation that something has been following me.” Yoshiken said.
“Well, it’s hard not to think there’s something creepy in this house. “ Teo said. “Come on, we are losing even more light.”
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Yin and Yoshee were now ahead of the others, blocking the gilder from Ansem’s grasp.
“ANSEM!” Yin shouted. “STOP NOW, DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT YOU ARE DOING?!”
“Stopping you from getting in the air, of course.” he replied.
“What do you care?” Yoshee asked.
“Let’s just say I have things up there I need to do up there, and I don’t need you to interfere.” he said.
“We we’re going to, but now you got us curious.” Jay said.
“Way to go, Ansem.” one of his bomb-omb minions replied.
“Quiet you, or I’ll throw you next!” Ansem shouted, giving it a prompt whack. It turned red on impact and it’s fuse lit up.
“AHHHHHHHHH!!!” Ansem shouted, realizing it was about to explode. He pointed toward the group. “If you’re going to blow up, at least it away from me!”
The bomb-omb began to race toward Yoshee and Yin. They both tried to block the bomb, but it passed by them and continued running, headed strait for the glider.
“Uh oh.” LD said. “Ok, building time is over, it’s time to fly this thing.”
“Wait, but we’re not done!” Jay shouted.
“No time, we’re out of here!” LD shouted. He jumped on the glider and held out a hand.
“Toranto!” LD shouted. A small whirl wind appeared behind the glider, giving it a quick and sudden boost. It was now rushing down the runway at great speed, headed strait toward Ansem.
“Wait!” Jay shouted. He jumped, and with luck, grasped a pipe on the glider and clung on as it sped. Ansem gasped and threw himself to the side to allow the glider to skid past. It must have been going about 80, 90 miles and hour now, as the yoshi and dragon struggled to stay on.
They were now racing toward the runway at incredible speed. The edge was coming up, and beyond that, nothing but either the skies ahead or a long plunge down to the ocean.
“COME ON!” LD shouted. He looked down and ordered a wind attack at the ground. The glider jumped and hit the edge of the cliff, now in the air… it was time.
“…come on, fly, fly, fly…” Jay repeated.
The glider’s front was poised into the sky, as it slowly began to gain altitude. LD increased the strength of the wind in the back to try to further propel the glider further along.
“Yeah, alright!” LD shouted.
“…I can’t believe it… we’re actually flying.” Jay said.
Though with a sudden drop, the craft began to fall. The wing was now striking it from above, causing the entire thing to shake weakly, but then to a harsh violence.
“What the heck?!” Jay shouted. “NO!”
LD gasped. “…maybe we could lose some weight?”
“…what are you talking about?” Jay asked. “I’m a very fit dragon-AHHH!!” LD gave him a quick nudge, which was strong enough to make him lose his grasp. LD watched him fall further and further until he hit the ocean below.
“SORRY!” LD called out. “Send me the bill when I get up in the sky!
The gilder was now regaining altitude, with the front tipping higher and higher into the sky. The angle was increasing by the second, to 50 degrees, to 75, to 80, to 85... And then 90.
The glider was now perfectly vertical. …though suddenly, it came to a slowing halt… until it suspended itself in air for a second.
…and then it turned down, with the front pointing strait down at the island. LD gasped. The glider continued to dive further and further down, faster and faster. The island was quickly coming up toward him, and he gave a loud scream as it did.
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Merier, in doll form, was left on the top deck of the Majestuosa looked up into the sky.
“…ah, what a day.” he said. “…but my, night is rather cold here.”
He could suddenly hear the sound of a crecendoing scream. “…hm?”
There was a sudden loud slash. LD fell into the water right aside the Majestuosa, after breaking free of the gilder. Now, the abandoned craft was left tot crash by itself. It landed at and angle, with it’s front pointed into the sand right next to the ship. A wave of sand was thrown all about, causing it to coat the entire area.
The port side of the Majestuosa was now covered in sand. Merier, who was now also buried beneath some sand, gasped. With his already shrunken voice muffled, he asked. “…what in the world was that?”
LD surfaced out of the water. “Aw, crud.”
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Jay gave a loud gasp as he also surfaced out of the water. “…that LD.” he gasped. “Uh…”
He looked back onto the Airway isle. From the distance of the island, he was about 1 mile or so.
“Perfect.” he said. “LD, I swear, when I get back, I’ll…”
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And that short one is going to be it for now. More coming, but It’s going to be a while now.
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New Yoshi
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Post by Kiko on May 2, 2006 17:45:02 GMT -5
Oh Can you add me please^^
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Post by Leoshi on May 2, 2006 19:23:55 GMT -5
Well, I have quite alot characters as it is, but I could still try to, but it might not be so for a while. And perhaps could you like a more detail description of your character?
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on May 2, 2006 19:25:44 GMT -5
hoo boy,it looks like I'm going to get now. XD
keep it up
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Post by Yoshiken on May 2, 2006 19:30:02 GMT -5
Awesome Chapter Leo! Im glad they are back ^^, I was actually really curious on what happened to Demon XD, hopefully I get to fight him again ^^.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on May 2, 2006 22:51:46 GMT -5
Lol, I like the glider scene. Great job, Leo, and take your time, of course. No worries. ^^
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Post by Teo on May 3, 2006 9:43:16 GMT -5
OH BOY!! It's back, maybe not officially, but hey! I'm happy with this chapter. It's another building block in the story that will be the skycraper... We can wait if it means your school, don't worry  |
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Post by UMS Author Lava on May 4, 2006 13:26:56 GMT -5
You can call the Bob-omb Heartless Klob-ombs if you want.
...Still waiting for Yoshee to send her lines...
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on May 4, 2006 18:30:42 GMT -5
hoo boy,it looks like I'm going to get now. XD keep it up *cracks knuckles* Oh, you have no idea...you have no idea... It's good to see another chapter, nice one. Sorry if I'm late...anyway, I'll wait for the next chapter. |
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Post by Lord of the Dance on May 4, 2006 22:49:14 GMT -5
You can call the Bob-omb Heartless Klob-ombs if you want. ...Still waiting for Yoshee to send her lines... Sorry; as I said, I'm an idiot when it comes to computers. =P I got one sent, though... Yay, we're fighting Ansem... still... But how do we get off that platform? XD |
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