|
Post by red.yoshi on Mar 17, 2008 17:02:41 GMT -5
I see, was a little confused, but not much! You and your obsession with frying pans XDDD. Great work, I can't wait to read more!
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Mar 17, 2008 22:26:57 GMT -5
Yeah.. my mind gets mixed up, sadly.. D= Here's chapter seven.. LEVEL UP ! !
-----
Chapter 7- Still nighttime..
Lucky entered the Inn and went up to the second floor, noticing the orb was with Tamesis. "Yeah. Can you give the orb back? Kiara's not gonna be too happy.. And Don't break it.If you do--" He stopped after that. "IGNORE WHAT I SAID!"
"Thanks, little bro.." Tamesis said. taking the orb, he threw it at the wall. It fell down, cracking. It stopped after the color faded to dark blue.
"Aww man! You cracked it! What am I gonna tell her! Ah well. at least whatever was inside it didn't come out- I said too much again.. and I don't have a brother!" Lucky frowned, beginning to leave. right before he went down the stairs, he saw Crystal. "You. You're supposed to be with us."
"What if I don't want to go??" Crystal asked.
Lucky didn't know how to respond to that. "Uh.. I'm leaving now.." While he walked down the stairs, he mumbled "Stupid Duplighost.."
"... Dangit.." Crystal muttered.
The next day..
"Dude, I can't believe Lucky left the orb here.." Kerry said, laughing.
'I wonder what Lucky ment by whatever was inside this thing..?" Tamesis asked, trying to find out how to make it break into pieces. "The wall didn't work.. I wonder.." He looked at Crystal.
"Oh No.. I'm NOT going to discharge myself again.." Crystal protested. First, it rarely even happened, so there was 1/200 chance it could happen. plus, she didn't know how to do it. it just happened randomly..
"Aw.." Tamesis frowned (If that's even possible..)" when she said that.
-----
That's the end of another weird chapter.. LEVEL UP ! ! i hope it isn't confusing.
|
|
|
Post by red.yoshi on Mar 18, 2008 16:28:00 GMT -5
Just a bit, but its got me wondering what's inside that orb! I can't wait for the next one!
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Mar 18, 2008 21:03:54 GMT -5
I'm trying my best NOT to make it confusing.. x.x Sadly, it isn't working. D=
|
|
|
Post by Sanjo on Mar 21, 2008 12:04:28 GMT -5
Ah, well don't worry yourself over it. Trust me, that's the last thing you want to do for something like this. Just take your time and be as clear as you can. That's all it takes, so it isn't that much of a problem.
Otherwise, I'm enjoying the story! You think she'll randomly discharge anyway, knowing how random things are? >.< Can't wait for more! ;D
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Mar 22, 2008 16:40:25 GMT -5
Yeah.. It takes a while for me to think of chapters and put them up. Yeah, it's true..
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Apr 15, 2008 21:11:52 GMT -5
Sorry I haven't been on in a while.. IT'S THE STUPID HOMEWORK! *asplodes* Sorry.. x.x
|
|
|
Post by Sanjo on Apr 16, 2008 14:58:40 GMT -5
Haha, don't sweat it. I haven't even updated my story yet due to school.... . Take your time with it!
|
|
|
Post by Wolf67 on Apr 20, 2008 21:29:28 GMT -5
Pretty good chapters. And the frying pan thing had to make me laugh! LOL!!! =
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on May 5, 2008 18:29:56 GMT -5
This is where the adventure REALLY begins.. xD
-----
Chapter 8- the return of the prognostcus.
It was daytime, and they all walked out of the Inn. "Great, now what? this stupid thing's only cracked a little. How am I supposed to break this stupid thing?!" Tamesis complained. "Quit complaining-" Kerry began. he could've said something else, if it hadn't been for a book knocking him down. "Ow."
"What the heck is this?" Tamesis picked the book up and began reading it.
"Even though it began a long time ago, this is where it really begins. The orb breaks into ten pieces, and just like last year, the same map used for the time shards, it'll be used to look for the ten blue shards." Tamesis stopped reading it, for the rest, was blank.
".. Time shards? I'm confused." Kerry mumbled.
"Oh yeah.. the ten time shards from the year before. I saw that book the year before. it's supposed to be called the cursed prognosticus." Crystal explained.
"... How the heck is this supposed to break--" Tamesis began again, but stopped. Mysteriusly by itself, the ball went into midair before cracking. Soon, it broke into ten pieces before disappearing. the group watched. Finally when hey looked around, Crystal was nowhere to be found. "I guess she ran away..." Doopliss mumbled.
They were right.
"I gotta find Zuna.." Crystal told herself. This wa surprising, but she had to tell Zuna what happened. She knew the shapeshifter was usually in the Rogueport sewers. Once she got there, she yelled "ZUNA!!"
"What?" Zuna growled. This was the first time it happened. When she saw Crystal, she was surprised.
"You're not gonna believe what happened. Someone found the cursed prognosticus again, the orb broke into ten pieces, and--"
"Oh crud. my sister's orb. We gotta find Lucky. LUCKY!!" Zuna yelled, running off in one direction. Crystal folowed her. Both of them found Lucky, and he looked fine. but there was one thing that wasn't right.
When Lucky saw them, he said "Who are you people?!"
"That's the exact same thing Sarmad said.." Crystal mumbled. Wow. Deja Vu.
"How come you can still remember stuff?" Zuna asked.
"It's only the events that happened last year. the rest I can't remember." Crystal sighed.
"Oh. You got a point there- Hey, where'd he go?" Zuna and Crystal looked around. Zuna guessed that Lucky ran off when they were talking.
-----
It's teh return of the cursed prognosticus. Maybe I should use that for my fanfic's title.. but.. it didn't really show up until now.. So. I don't think I should use it for the title of the fanfic. Sorry if it's confusing.
|
|
|
Post by red.yoshi on May 6, 2008 15:40:18 GMT -5
Not very confusing. I think it might fit well for a title =). Some books have titles that have nothing to do with the story.
Yay, you picked up here from your last story =D. I just hope this one doesn't end short like the last D=.
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on May 6, 2008 17:10:47 GMT -5
yeah.. D= Well, at least I picked up from the last story. xD
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Jun 18, 2008 10:50:39 GMT -5
Meh.. I'm kinda tired of trying to think of another chapter.. I dunno why, I'm just not that good with fanfics that relate to the last one somehow.
|
|
|
Post by red.yoshi on Jun 18, 2008 15:34:57 GMT -5
That's understandable. However, you are a great author. =) Don't let yourself down on one fanfic. I'd love to see you start another fresh one P=.
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Jun 18, 2008 17:05:30 GMT -5
yeah. I'm thinking of starting a pokemon fanfic... hopefully, i'll finally get back to this one and put up a chapter. you never know if it might be today. xD
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Jun 18, 2008 17:38:35 GMT -5
Chapter 9's finally here...
-----
Chapter 9
It didn't take too long before Tamesis and Kerry realized Doopliss left.
"Great.. he left.." Kerry mumbled. The two brothers soon left. About 5 minutes later, Zuna had exited the sewers and walked behind the Inn. Her sister showed up after, frowning.
"Now what? I figured my orb broke when I found this piece.." Kiara pulled out a pice of the orb. "You planning on bringing the void back?
Zuna nodded. She remembered that the red void first appeared when she somehow found out that the time heart split into ten pieces. She must've said some sort of spell, and the red void appeared again.
"Where'd you get that spell from?" Kiara asked.
"It's a spell that brings something back from the past.." Zuna began. before the shapeshifter said anything else, the ground shook, and something flew out of the void. "oh no. the time heart.. I forgot that it was still in the void." Zuna whispered.
"What was that?"
"Nothing."
--
Kendra was also in rogueport when this happened. Seeing the red void, she frowned. "Oh no. Deja vu.. I gotta fix this." She used the time travel spell.
Unfortunately for her, the spell malfuntioned, she was hurled seven years into the past- in Twilight town. when she landed next to a building, she was glad nobody even noticed.
The bad thing? She couldn't find her wand ANYWHERE. She needed her wand if she wanted to use some spells. Without it, they wouldn't work.
-----
There's chapter 9. yes, as usual it may be confusing. wonderin' why Kendra got hurled 7 years into the past? well, I'm not tellin ya. well, not until chapter 10.. Yes, like i said, it probably will be confusing. That's me. I sometimes confuse people. XD
|
|
|
Post by red.yoshi on Jun 19, 2008 12:33:14 GMT -5
Wow, Kendra's stuck in the past with none of her spells! I think this might get intense =O. Great work, can't wait for chapter 10.
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Jun 19, 2008 13:15:49 GMT -5
What can I say? I luv messing with my charries. ;D
|
|
zuna
New Yoshi
Posts: 72
|
Post by zuna on Jun 19, 2008 14:56:24 GMT -5
Chapter 10's here! ----- Chapter 10 Kendra sighed. "I guess I'll go look for my wand.." She started heading to Twilight trail, but when she got through the gates, she saw Kerry and Tamesis. "Okay, so for the next two nights we stay in the woods over there. First one to go back to twilight town loses." Tamesis said. "You're on.." Kerry grinned before they left. Kendra blinked. "That was.. Random." she looked at the shed ad frowned. "It can't be in there." Heading back to twilight town, she noticed someone come out of one of the houses. It was a Koopa. She started walking towards the warp pipe. Kendra quietly followed her. -- Yes, back to the present. Sarmad looked around the island. He had no idea what the heck happened. Even though everyone was okay, the buildings seemed to be broken. "I guess they got a little destructive while I was gone.." He said. Going into his house, he tried to look for something. "Where the heck is it?" he mumbled. Something knocked him over. Getting up, he noticed it was the time heart. "But.. How? I thought it was gone last year. What's it doing here- Not again.." Frowning, he sighed. "It's not here!" -- Back to the past.. Once in Rogueport Sewers, Kendra stayed where she was- on a platform. She looked down at the Koopa, who had no idea she was there. "Finally. Five years as a Koopa can be a pain.. I'm gonna miss Lucky, Kerry, and Tamesis" The Koopa told herself. What surprised Kendra was that the Koopa changed to a duplighost.. it appeared to be Crystal. "I'll probably regret this later." Once Crystal was out of her sight, kendra blinked. "I wonder who she means by Lucky, Kerry and Tamesis? Eh. Never heard of them before-- Hey! Here's my wand! how'd it get here?" Until now, Kendra hadn't noticed the wand was next to her. Sighing in relief, she used the timetravel spell again, and she was in rogueport again, seven years later. "Finally." Kendra smiled. remembering what happened Last year, she realized that the tiem heart had ben in the void when it disappeared. "I forgot about that! It'll be a while before I find it again.. Maybe someone else found it." ----- I'm done with this chapter. I just needed Sarmad to show up again. don't ask me what he was looking for, I don't even know, either. this was... fast.
|
|
|
Post by red.yoshi on Jun 20, 2008 11:36:26 GMT -5
Yes, but some of the past is also revealed to Kendra. Great job with this Zuna! Looking forward to your next chapter!
|
|