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Post by zuna on Jun 21, 2008 0:11:52 GMT -5
chapter 11's here! ----- Chapter 11 Sarmad went to the school He and Anna used to go. it was also sort of destroyed. He saw two Yoshis and asked "Any of you seen my boomerang?" "I thought you broke it in half and gave it to Anna for the whole friendship thing.." The first Yoshi said. "What he said." the other Yoshi said. "Thanks for reminding me guys. but where's the other half of it?" "You don't remember? That's just sad. I remember you telling us you hid it in the playground, in a bush." the second Yoshi said. Sarmad ran to the playground, but there were five Bushes. "it's gotta be here." He said. Searching through all five Bushes, he found the first half of it. Sighing in relief, he went to Anna's house. "sorry about this, Anna." He said. he noticed something on the ground, and picked it up. it was the second half of the Boomerang. it took him about 15 minutes to get it in one piece again. Exiting, he looked around. it took him two days o get to rogueport town. why? I don't know. At least he remembered to bring the Time heart with him, too. During those two days, Tamesis and Kerry looked for the shards. no luck yet. "Dang. Two days and we didn't find one." Kerry said. "I know." "You have the book with ya?" "What book? Oh yeah." Tamesis opened the book (Without hands?  ) "The red void from last year will appear again, and if they don't find it in 13 days, What the heck, I'm not gonna say it all over again! and on the way, they will meet a yoshi with the time heart, but here's the twist. they have to have the time heart, the orb, and something else to make sure the void's gone forever." "Wow.." Kerry said. "I know.." Tamesis sighed. ----- And that's the end of chapter 11. |
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Post by red.yoshi on Jun 21, 2008 14:15:30 GMT -5
So that's what Sarmad must have been searching for in the previous chapter! Great work Zuna, looking forward for chapter 12!
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Post by zuna on Jun 21, 2008 19:26:47 GMT -5
Chapter 12!
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"you mean we only got eleven days left to find them?! We'll never find the pieces in time!" Kerry yelled.
"I agree with that..." Tamesis mumbled. He found a map on the floor and picked it up. It appeared to be the same one used for the time shards, except the shards were replaced by blue shards. Only two were there. one in Twilight trail, the other in Fahr outpost. Kiara had the final one, and the other seven weren't even in that world.
"It says seven aren't even in this world.. I guess They're in another one, but.. we don't even know.. Maybe we'll find out soon.. Lets head to Twilight trail first." Kerry said.
"Good idea.." Tamesis rolled his eyes before they headed to Twilight trail.
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Kendra was at Twilight town again. "How'd I end up here again? Oh yeah. I wandered around 'till I got lost.." She sighed. "I guess I'll stay here for a while.." The Koopa looked right behind her. There was a light blue ball of light there.
"Ok, this is too weird." Kendra said.
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Kiara looked around. she was sokmewhere near the fahr outpost, but she couldnt move. the snow had fallen on her, making her look like a snowman. "And I wonder why I never came here.." She said under the snow.
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Once Sarmad got there, he took out his mask."should I?" He asked himself. Having no choice, he put it on. the time heart was behind him as he wandered the place.
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Short chapter, I know. I won't have Sarmad and Anna show up for the final time in this fanfic until Kerry and Tamesis have found the first 9 pieces. Kiara has the final one, so, yes. You heard me. the other seven are in another world. You'll find out soon.
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Post by red.yoshi on Jun 22, 2008 12:06:31 GMT -5
Woot! I love adventure stories =D. I hope the next chapter is here soon!
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Post by zuna on Jun 22, 2008 22:58:02 GMT -5
Chapter 13!
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It took them two days, but Kerry and Tamesis finally found the first two shards. "Two down, eight more to go." Kerry said. Tamesis nodded in agreement. they were mysteriously yanked into some sort of portal. they were in Fahr outpost that time. the same thing happened to Kendra and the light blue ball of light, Kiara, Zuna, Crystal, Lucky, Sarmad and Anna.
Kerry and Tamesis appeared to be in the forest. "What the heck..?" They said the same time. Kerry tried to pull out the map, but it had been rplaced by another one. He opened it, and he noticed they were in another world. they were in the forest. the other places were a lake, a cave, the desert, the snowy mountains, the valley, and the sky? Each of the seven shards were in there, but the final one wasn't there.
"someone must've found one." Tamesis said. "Lets go to the Lake first, since it's closer. then it's the valley, Desert, mountains, cave, then the sky." he added.
"Okay. Here's the shard." Kerry said, picking the blue shard off the ground. It was their third one.
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Short chapter, I know.
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Post by red.yoshi on Jun 23, 2008 22:04:39 GMT -5
Hmm, I wonder if the other shards will be as easy to get as the one they had just found on the ground. I also wonder who took the missing shard? I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out P=.
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Post by zuna on Jun 24, 2008 0:16:51 GMT -5
it will be easy, except for the lake part, but it takes a LONG time for them to get to a certain area. yes, easy to find, but it takes a while to get there.
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Post by zuna on Jun 24, 2008 2:13:43 GMT -5
Chapter 14
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Chapter 14- the beginning of the fight
"How do we find the Lake?" Kerry asked.
"We're already here." Tamesis looked at the lake. Kerry looked down into the water. "There it is!" he yelled. Before Tamesis said anything, Kerry jumped into the water.
Kerry dove to the bottom of the lake. "Almost got it." He said. He was about to grab it when an enemy popped out. it appeared to be a huge snake (serpent. whatever. I'm going by the snake thing.).
It took a few hours to knock it down. Kerry grabbed the shard and Jumped out.
"so.. the valley's next?" Kerry asked. Tamesis nodded. it took about two days to get to the bottom of he valley. Again, they found it. it was inside a tree. it took them a day in the cave to find the shard, since it was pitch black inside the cave.
While they were in the desert, Kerry was suffering from the heat, and the sun was about to lght up a fuse on Tamesis.
"When will we find the shard?" Kerry complained.
"Soon.." Tamesis muttered. "It'll be night soon, too. so we can rest before going to the mountains."
"How many days do we have left?"
"I think it's.. six days.."
"Okay."
It was night, and while they were sleeping, Kerry had woke up to find something shiny on the sand. it was the shard. Once it was morning, kerry told Tamesis he found it, and they headed to the mountains.
t took about two days to get there. the desert was at the bottom of the map, and the mountans was at the top, so it made sense. they found the shard under the snow, and it took another three days to get to the sky.
"how many days do we have left?" Kerry asked.
"One day. look. from way over here, I can see the void. it's huge!"
Kerry's eyes widened. "ONE DAY?! We'll never make it in time!!"
"We will!" Tamesis yelled. When it was night time, they found the shard in an abandoned house in the sky. Wow, weird. Just then, EVERYONE was teleported back to rogueport.
"Ah, so you found the shards." Kiara said.
"But She has the final shard. it's only a few hours 'till the end.." Zuna said.
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There. done with chapter 14.
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Post by zuna on Jun 24, 2008 2:29:00 GMT -5
Chapter 15!
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Chapter 15- the fight
Everyone was there. Kendra, the ball of light, the brothers, Crystal, the two sisters, everyone. Even Sarmad.
"Ok. we'll have to fight then.." Kerry said. they startes. it was a two on two at first. Kendra and everyone else watched them fight. Kerry and tamesis against Lucky and Kiara. Sarmad was the one who used the Boomerang to get the final shard. "Anna, quick! put them together with Crystal's help!" He yelled.
"The boomerang. you fixed it?" Anna said.
"Yeah. sorry.."
Anna and Crystal started to Fix the orb. it was abou half an hour left when they fixed it. the ball of light flew into the orb, and all of a sudden, Crystal and Lucky got their memories back. they took a break.
Crystal called all three of the brothers over and said "I'm your sister.." she said.
"No. that can't be possible. We never saw her for seven years." Kerry said.
Crystal sighed. she duplicated a koopa, and went back to a duplighost.
"Wow.. I never saw this coming." Tamesis said.
five minutes left till the end.
"We got five minutes left!!" Anna yelled.
"Quick before the void grows any bigger!" Sarmad grabbed the time heeart and threw it into the void. Anna did the same with the orb.
All of them watched the void shrink. finally, it disappeared for good.
"Now.. we got an unfinished fight." Crystal said.
Kiara backed away. "RUN!" She yelled. she ran off with her sister following. the yoshis, brothers, crystal and kendra all chased the shapeshifters, yelling "Get back here!!"
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How's that for an ending? *note sarcasm*
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Post by red.yoshi on Jun 24, 2008 12:10:38 GMT -5
Pretty good =). The fight could've been more graphic and explanatory, but overall it was a pretty good ending! You also opened up the possibility for a sequel, but I don't know if you want to write anymore on this series P=. Great job Zuna!
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Post by zuna on Jun 24, 2008 13:35:22 GMT -5
Thanks! Sorry it ended up short. I was doing this last night, and I got sleepy..
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) "The red void from last year will appear again, and if they don't find it in 13 days, What the heck, I'm not gonna say it all over again! and on the way, they will meet a yoshi with the time heart, but here's the twist. they have to have the time heart, the orb, and something else to make sure the void's gone forever."