Good or Evil?

[Enrique]

Eek! I'm going to... fight?! Ooh... I sense betrayal... Could get interesting... Great job on this chapter, Leo! Can't wait to see more! ^^

[Yapi]

Yay!!! great chappy Leo!! thanks for including Nauro ;D

[Yin]

I sense a big fight coming on! A great chapter as always, great job Leoshi!

[Leoshi]

Thanks! I will continue this story as soon as I can!

[Teo]

Wewt!! Very good, at this rate, you'll make a novel! Give'm a cheer!

<{^_^}>

[UMS Author Lava]

Moshi, you fiend! I'm starting to trust you less and less with every chapter!!
Yay for fourth-wall-breaking. ;D
And John, how could you fall for that so easily?! You and her are obviously allied with Ansem, I know it!!!!
Good chapter, Leo! Recover quickly! That book's stronger in YOUR hands only!
...And if it's at all possible, could you toss in a guest appearance of Ansem, Sephiroth, Wart, and Oogie Boogie?

[Leoshi]

Heh, thanks guys! Just so you know, I'm planning a big twist soon with Moshi's character, only because she's become so promenent. Uh... maybe, Lava. If I had any idea what their persoanlities are like

[UMS Author Lava]

Alright, based on my comix...
Ansem (Kingdom Hearts)>>>The main bad guy and the nuttiest. His brain is like a brick, but he wields very powerful darkness. So usually, his elites have to correct him.
Sephiroth (Final Fantasy VII)>>>One of Ansem's highest elites. He usually has to reject/correct Ansem's completely lame plans the most. He also prefers to stay at home.
Wart (Super Mario Bros. 2)>>>He's one of the muscles. He also likes having the other bad guys buy the stuff for him. In short, a lazy dork. He's also hideously out of shape.
Oogie Boogie (Nightmare Before Christmas)>>>A gambling ghoul who provides the artillery. He often has a bad habit of rushing foolishly at rivals, but not as bad as Ansem.

[Leoshi]

I can try to see if I can fit them in. Though I like to have once central villian. Since I'm a guarter of the way through the second, I already have the 2nd villian all set (the 1st one was the principal). But I can try to fit them in later. Okay?

[UMS Author Lava]

Well, for this story, they'd be more like a nuisance than a central baddie group.

[Lord of the Dance]

Maybe they just appear randomly in a chapter and bother people, then as you said it was a guest appearance, they leave next chapter or something. Just an idea.

[Leoshi]

maybe, but I'd still need to think of a way of introducing them in. Anyway, don't expect them too soon, I want to Finnish the battle(s) first.

Okay guys, here I am with another part!

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Yoshee and Champ now found themselves immersed within a dark place.

"Where are we?" she asked.

<I dunno.> Champ added simply.

From as far as the eye could see, there where dead trees. The grass that had once looked lively had become an ugly brown. A creepy full moon hung over the twilight world.

"...this place is creepy." Yoshee commented. "...though I bet she might be here."

<Let's go check.> Champ said.

"Okay, let's go." She said, before walking deeper into the dark woods.

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Demon laughed evilly. "You sure are confident you will win."

"I am confident because I know it's inevitable." Yin said, smirking herself.

"...I hope she does. The book is at stake." John said.

"Can't we just escape with the book?" Moshi asked.

"What if we need to back up in if she needs help?" Yapi asked.

"Fine..." Moshi said. "...these fools just don't understand why I need this book. There's too much at stake... if I don't get it soon..."

They all looked back up to the sound of weapons clashing. Sparks flew in the air as the two continued in their combat. Demon succeeded in a punch, Yin dropper one of her swords and took a step back. Another strike was attempted by Demon with her blade. This time, she dodge the swipe and used her other sword to shield herself from the strike.

Both of them stood, holding their weapons against each other. They each tried to overpower the other, but failed and forced themselves apart.

"Give in." Demon said.

"This is where I draw the line..." Yin said. She held both hands together, ready to make hand signs. "I'm glad this is a harbor town."

Demon replied by raising an eyebrow.

Yin suddenly began to make quick hand signs. Every-time she switch a sign, she would chant in a foreign language. "Ni, me, ne, mi, ni..."

"What's she saying?" Teo asked.

"I have heard about this before, I think." Yapi said. "Jutsu, a special style of attack that uses an energy from within."

"Sounds like a waste of time. So what if she's making hand signs?" John asked.

"Wait!" Yoshifrog said.

"Ni, me... Tori!"

From the harbor behind her, water began to rise. Twisting and turning in the air, taking forms of a strange sort.

"Water Style: Water Dragon Justu!" Yin exclaimed.

The water took on the form of a dragon. This new embodiment of a dragon began to fly towards Demon.

"What?" he shouted.

As the dragon crashed on the ground, it turned back into water and swept Demon off his feet. The group lost sight of him from underneath the waves.

"Whoa..." Moshi said. Even she was impressed by the move.

Yin looked happy with her victory. "I think that got him."

Suddenly, Yapi pointed at Yin. "Look out!!"

Yin turned around and blocker herself from the flying kunei knife just in time. The weapon crashed on the wet floor.

"He's still alive?" Yin asked.

"Yes, I am..." Demon said, slowly arising from the waves.

"...this is no ordinary enemy." Yin stated.

"Yes, I am not." Demon said. "I shall never give in until the book is in my possession!"

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"So..." Lava said. "Why are you locking us here?"

"Orders from my own boss." Nauro said, after tying them up in a hard metal chain. "I was told to take you both directly to him."

"What does he want with us?" Enrique asked.

"You will find out." Nauro said.

From the darkness behind the chamber, he took another chain and tugged on it. A strange and large dragon esque figure emerged from the darkness.

"What is that?" Enrique asked.

"My ride." Nauro said. He tugged on the chains again, forcing the dragon creature to come beside them. Nauro jumped aboard the dragon, the grabbed the two Yoshis and secured them to the dragon.

"You are making a mistake." Enrique said. "If I think I know who your boss is, you are about to make the worst mistake of your life."

"Your talk is cheap." Nauro said.

As the dragon began to carry them away, Lava sighed. "You'll pay for this."

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Leoshi slowly opened up his green eyes. He was in a bed, and saw a blurry room.

Of course, it was only blurry because he wasn't wearing his glasses. he slowly reached for the nightstand and picked them up. He placed them over his eyes and took a look out the window.

"...how did I get here? Last I know, I was fighting and then..."

He suddenly gasped. "The book! It's gone!"

He began a frantic search of the room. That is, until he slowly came to the realization of what had occurred.

"...they brought me here. And then they took my book... because they can fight better then me."

Leoshi sighed. "...good. They don't need me. I've just put them through this mess... I haven't done any good."

The blue Yoshi got out of the bed and placed his gray sweatshirt on. "This is a battle they are better of without me."

He walked down into the cafe. He looked over to Podley.

"What can I do for you?" Podley asked.

"Pardon me..." Leoshi sighed. "But do you know when the boats arrive?"

"In a half hour." Podley said. "One will take you to Yoshi City."

"Good. I suppose we are all better off if I just leave them alone. They have the book, I can't fight... and they don't need me."

He decided it was time to leave. He quickly ran up, packed all of his belonging, then departed, heading for the docks...

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Another twist, again. That's what I have for now.

[Enrique]

Ooh... This is getting quite interesting. I'm on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see what happens next!

[Yapi]

whoa!!! no, don't take them Nauro, I command you!!! aaaa
and don't leave Leo!!

Hehe!!! great fic, keep it up Leo!!

[Yin]

Whoa a twist! Wasn't expecting that! And whoo hoo! A Water Dragon jutsu! I can't wait for the next chapter!

[Leoshi]

Back again with another part!

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"...where am I again?" Yoshee asked to her little Chao.

Champ merely shrugged. It seemed like they had been wandering around for hours in this dark world. But considering time seemed to be suspended here, it would be impossible to tell.

"It at least seems like the type of place she would be..." Yoshee sighed.

"You seem lost." a voice interrupted.

Yoshee quickly turned around. Behind her was a figure, concealed in the shade of a tree. It didn't appear to be too tall.

"Champ, who is this?" Yoshee asked.

<I dunno.> Champ replied. Yoshee got herself in a fighting position, holding out her tennis racket.

"Relax, child..." the voice said. "I have not come to harm you."

"Yeah?" Yoshee asked, still holding the racket. "Then why are you hiding?"

"I prefer the dark. I am not hiding." the creature said.

Yoshee slowly lowered her racket. "Really? Telling the truth?"

"I promise you, both of you." the creature said.

"Can we..." Yoshee sighed. "See you?"

"If you must." the creature said, sounding defeated. It sighed and slowly proceeded into the twilight.

It was an orange furred creature, with eyes that gleamed in the light. Small yellow spikes rad down it's body from it's head to tail. It wasn't at all intimidating, just a little nervous.

"Oh, hello." Yoshee said, admiring the cuteness of this little creature that stood near her feet.

"Greeting to you as well, young Yoshi." the creature said courteously.

"Oh, how weird of me. I'm Yoshee, and this is Champ."

<Hi!> Champ chirped in.

The creature gave a small laugh. "Pleasure. I am Kator, at your service." The creature lifted a paw from the ground and lowered himself, as if to bow before her.

"You're certainly a courteous fellow. How did you get here?" Yoshee asked.

"I have always been traveling. As long as I have known. I have come here in search of food. I haven't had a decent meal in a long time..." Kator said.

"...uh..." Yoshee said. Her heart was beating faster now as she realized what Kator may have meant by "meal.""

"Calm down. I am a herbivore." Kator said. "It is not in my ability to harm another."

Yoshee and Champ both gave a sigh of relief.

"You mind if I ask you a question?" Yoshee asked.

"Sure. However, I shouldn't stay in the light. Can we go to a place where there is only darkness?" Kator asked.

"...I suppose." Yoshee said, nervousness returning in her voice.

"You don't fear. You misunderstand my ways. Not understanding always leads to fear. Let your fears die, I shall not cause you harm." Kator said.

Yoshee looked to Champ, who nodded.

Yoshee looked back to Kator with a smile. "Okay."

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"...and just who are these?" a guard cloaked person asked.

Nauro approached the prison chamber of the dungeon, with both captives.

"They are in league with the one with the book." Nauro said. "I have orders to keep them locked here."

The guard opened up the gates of the prison, then threw both of the Yoshis in the cell.

"You two shall make fine bait!" Nauro shouted, before slamming the door hut and locking Lava and Enrique within.

"You'll pay for this!!" Lava shouted as the two evil guys walked away.

"Save your energy." Enrique said.

Lava looked back to him. "And what am I supposed to do?"

"I suggest you stay calm. I am trying to think of a plan."

"Well, Einstein, can you hurry it up? I haven't eaten in so long!" Lava shouted.

"We both ate lunch two hours ago." Enrique said.

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Sparks flew again as the blades continued to strike one another, as Yin and the soaked Demon continued to fight each other relentlessly.

"I can't stand to watch anymore." Yoshifrog said.

"We have to do something, or Yin's a goner!" Teo

"Fine." Yapi said. She reached out opened up the book. "Now how did that attack go again? The first one was a shield, so the second attacks... hm..."she thought for a moment.

"Oh, I know it now!" She exclaimed. "Ze-Shidome!"

...there was silence. Nothing had happened.

"You fool." Demon laughed. "Only the one destined for it can cast it's spells. No one else."

"On no!" Yapi said.

"We're just figuring this out now?" Moshi asked. "Some people are a step behind."

"Yes, even I knew that." John said simply.

"Oh, I have to get Leoshi! We have to bring him here and get him to end this!" Yapi said She got a running start, the spread her winds and kicked up into the air.

She gave a strong flap of her wings and gained altitude. It wasn't a long flight through the window of the hotel room.

"Leo?" She asked.

She looked and noticed the bed was empty.

"He's gone." She said. "Now how do we use the book?"

she ran downstairs and into the cafe. She ran up to Podley.

"Sir, did you see a blue, shy Yoshi with glasses?" she asked.

"Yes I did." he said. "He was going to the port. I think he is leaving."

"Oh no!" She said.

As she ran toward the port, she thought: "What if he's gone already? How can we use the book without getting him to cast a spell?"

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"All I was ever a use for was the book." Leoshi thought as he boarded a boat. He walked over to a rail as the propellers began to hum. The waves crashed from the back as the boat began to shift in the water.

He gave a saddened sigh. "They didn't really care about me, they just wanted the power of the book, just like everyone else. I think we're all better if I just leave and be alone."

The boat began to leave now. Leo continue to watch until Rogueport was fading away from sight.

"Goodbye." he said. "And good luck."

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Alright, that's it for that part. Oh, and Thanks Yapi again. If you recall, Kator was a character you made for the game too!

[Enrique]

Another great chapter, Leo! I also like the twist that you incorporated in the story as well.

[Gene L.D. Ryoko]

I knew somehow the were going to cast a spell and it wouldn't work, now moshi can't have the book either. great story so far

[Leoshi]

Thanks. I'm already thinking about how the next part will be

[Yapi]

that is just awesome!!! thanks a bunch for including the things I made for your game ;D



Great work Leo!! keep it up ;D ;D