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Post by Leoshi on Feb 3, 2006 14:32:25 GMT -5
Alright, I'll add them too. I will get this started as soon as possible
Edit: the only reason it's really famous is because it's the only fanfic that's actually really progressing as of now
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Post by Yoshiken on Feb 3, 2006 20:27:48 GMT -5
well, Yoshiken is very analytical in any situation. He always looks at every aspect especially if it has to do with the safety of others. He can also be very clumsy at times and is usually the comic relief in the group ^_^. In battle, his attitude becomes serious and he focuses on defeating the enemy at all costs. He will do what he must to insure his friends protection.
anything else you would like me to add ^_^
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 3, 2006 21:31:48 GMT -5
This should suffice. I already have the entire nexy arc planned, and I feel it will be good. I just need a bit more time to finnish a request first, but I'll get on this the second I can.
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Feb 3, 2006 21:39:03 GMT -5
I'd love to join my personality is arogent or aggresive. meh I love all these epics,another favorite is the haunted mansion.
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 4, 2006 18:41:17 GMT -5
Right, here’s my next part, which would be the first of the third arc. I will include all of the new characters, as promised.
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The sun was shinning brightly over a new day.
“Hey, what’s wrong?” Yapi asked suddenly. She and the others had noticed that Teo was flying lower and slower in the air.
“He must be exhausted.” Yin said. “We’ve been in the air for a day and a half now. We’re all tired too. I say we land and eat.”
“Good idea. I may getting bored again.” Moshi said.
Teo gave a quiet grunt, as if in relief. No sooner had it been said, he began to dramatically decrease in altitude, slowly but surely falling back to the Earth.
“Hey, not that fast!” Yoshifrog shouted in distress.
As they flew lower after passing through some clouds, Leo caught sight of an enormous body of water, with ends not visible to his eye. A small town was set at the edge of this body of water. That was the site that Teo wanted to land in, because he took a turn toward the town. The others trusted his judgment and waited.
He chose a grassy plain on the edge of this town. It looked like a peaceful area, decorated with beautiful and color flowers what seemed to dance in the winds that brushed against them.
However, their scan of this place was disrupted as Teo seemed to give up his flight from exhaustion. Just like that, they began their immediate, 45 degree decent toward these plains. The group gave a shout, just before he made contact with the earth, sending dust a dirt everywhere on impact.
The others where all thrown off with the sudden impact. Luckily, a nearby patch of flowers acted like cushions and broke their fall.
One by one, they poked their heads out of the patch of tall flowers to look at the dragon that had struck the ground. They watched as it slowly shrunk and changed form, until it had reverted back to Teo’s Yoshi form.
“I think he’s hurt.” John said. “…this isn’t good.”
“We got to take him to an Inn or something.” Yoshifrog said.
The group collectively picked up Teo’s hurt body, before walking into the town which was only about a block away.
A gate at the entrance to the town let them know that this town’s name was “Oceanside.” It looked like a simple suburb, with a set of docks near the water’s side, though no boats where docked there. Common-day Yoshis walked on the streets, with children playing in the yards and a car or too running by. Flowers grew Just your regular, yoshi-inhabited town.
The group quickly rushed in and ran down the streets, until they discovered a single house that had the sign “Resort” on it. They rushed into the building and where instantly amazed.
The posh interior was enormous, with a fountain in the center of the majestic lobby. People in fancy cloths sat in comfortable looking red couches, engaging in conversation.
“This place reminds me of Poshley Heights.” Lava added.
“…yeah, I guess it does.” Yoshee said, with her chao nodding in agreement.
“C’mon, let’s get a room.” Yoshifrog said, running to the counter.
The others followed her to the main counter, where a clerk greeted them on the spot.
“Welcome to Flor Majestuosa Resort.” the keeper said.
“Interesting name.” Yapi said. “I’ll bet it’s got something to do with all the flowers around here.”
“Yes indeed.” the clerk said. “You see, Oceanside is a simple town, but well known for the great flowers. You see, they only grow here and are the town’s main income. Aside from fishing, that it.” the clerk said. “So, may I set you up for rooms?”
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The group settled Teo into a room before going downstairs into the outdoor dinning court nearby a pool. Some of the group, along with the other guests, decided get a bite to eat whilst others decided to go for a swim instead.
Enrique was kicking back in a chair, while doing something on a calculator. “Guys… I suppose we should asked the townsfolk if they know anything about the temple we’re going to. It wouldn’t hurt.”
“Maybe, but later.” Yin said, kicking back in her own chair and reading a book. “I want to enjoy our day first.” She opened her mouth and let her tongue shoot out. It latched onto Enrique’s sandwich on the table. Before he could react, she pulled her tongue back into her mouth and swallowed it hole.
“Hey, that was mine!” Enrique shouted.
“Quit bickering.” Moshi said. “I’m hungry too.” With that, she shot out her tongue as well and devoured a plate of food on the table. Not just the food, but the plate too.
“…that was uncalled for.” Yoshifrog said.
“First come, first serve.” Moshi said.
The others gave sighs. Lava looked at the others, making sure nobody was looking. As soon as he did, he unleashed his own tongue and caught a piece of bread in his mouth from Yapi.
“So, is that the game?” She asked.
“It would appear so…” Yin said.
With that, everyone at the table began to each other’s foods, minus Leoshi who watched and Champ who was rooting Yoshee on.
John got up from the table. “I will just be going now.”
Leoshi looked up at him. “Are you okay?”
“…yes.” John said, as if in hesitation.
“Just be safe, okay?” Leoshi looked as though he wanted to say more, but a tongue shot from the crowd and latched into his arm.
He gasped, worried at the possibilities. “I’m not a food product!” he shouted, before getting dragged into the brawl by the tongue.
John saw that as an appropriate time to dismiss himself. Quickly and quietly, he walked away, leaving the inn and into the town itself. …all the while, though, he failed to notice that a set of eyes was watching him…
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Quick, but that's it for now. I'll get more done when I can. People who added new characters, expect to see them soon
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Post by moshi5694 on Feb 4, 2006 18:47:58 GMT -5
Sorry for not replying earlier. Yay! I'm having fun in a, uh, sarcastic way, but hey, sarcastic is a part of my nature. ^^ More!
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Post by Yoshiken on Feb 4, 2006 19:36:25 GMT -5
awesome intro to this arc yo! I love the way you are able to transition from chapter to chapter so well!
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Post by Enrique on Feb 4, 2006 19:47:40 GMT -5
Poor Teo... I like the part where we fight for lunch. XD Great start to the next arc, Leo!
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Feb 4, 2006 20:54:30 GMT -5
I've been reading for a while, and I'm liking the series so far Leo! It's Supenseful and Humorous too. ^^ Heh heh.
Hey, well I was going to ask you could I join, but it looks like a lot came in. So...that's up to you. If you do, I'll post the stuff about myself.
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 4, 2006 21:02:22 GMT -5
Sure, I can add more! Go ahead
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Post by Wildfire the Dragon on Feb 4, 2006 21:43:14 GMT -5
Can you use me as a Dragon? You decide. I'm the friendly, kind, aggressive(In battle sometimes.), smart, but sort of a Wise Crack. Yeah, I usually like to imtimidate or make a small insult to friends or enemies(And sometimes Regret it, so I only do it sometimes). I'm also kind of smart, since I made inventions like Hover Shoes, which looked like Shadow's, except Blue where the White, and Yellow at the Hover parts. And sometimes, I like to copy certain moves from others, a lot. Now, you'll see me trying to copy Sonic's Barrel Roll, and Spin Dash(Can you add that last part? About copying moves?) I like to use my Wind Dragon Sword, It's a Heavy Sword with a Green Dragon Head, holding the Sword and Handle. I also use my Wind Abilties. My favorite move is Wind Cutter, that's when I make a Tornado around my opponent and it slashes them inside the twister. I also know how to breathe fire. (It's Green/White. Remember that comment I made on that picture of myself as a Full Dragon "A certain Green Dragon", yeah, I got it from him.) I will usually combine my Wind Abilites with my Sword to make powerful attacks. And don't forget my Jaws & Claws, but it's rare that I'll use my Fangs. I'm sure this will do. Is this OK? Here's the picture: www.deviantart.com/view/28580636/
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 4, 2006 22:04:02 GMT -5
Alright, so I got... lesse... 8 new characters now! Okay, that's enough for one arc. I'm going to get started right away with the next part!
Oh, and thank you who where kind enough to reply!
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Post by Gene L.D. Ryoko on Feb 4, 2006 22:58:39 GMT -5
lmao,thats funneh
"I'm not a food product",the next day starts off with peace, w00t
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 5, 2006 11:24:51 GMT -5
Ok, here's the next part:
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John continued to walk down the quiet streets. The sun shone brightly, and the wind to cool the heat made the weather almost perfect.
His walk brought him to the docks. It was quiet there, except for a few fishermen whom had lines cased over the side. Though he found it peculiar that there wasn't a single boat there, or anywhere in sight. Why was that?
John began to proceed down the docks, with his books laking the sounds of small squeaks as they met saltwater drops on the dock.
"Hello, boy." a fisherman said, after casting another line into the water. "Haven't seen your face around these parts. You must be a newcomer."
"...uh, yeah." John said. "...um... would you know of a temple?"
"A temple, eh?" The fisherman asked. "Well, I heard of a strange ruins place on the other side of this here sea."
"Sea, huh?" John asked. "It is such a large body of water, but it doesn't qualify as an ocean, because it's within the continent."
"I recommend you travel around the sea, and take a left over at the exit of town." the fisherman continued.
"Wouldn't it save time to cross over the sea instead?" John asked.
The fisherman frowned. "No, only a fool crosses over this here sea. No normal folk ever cross over the sea. Nobody does... nope, nobody, 'cause it's filled with pirates."
John slowly rose an eyebrow. "Pirates?"
"Yes. Why do you think we keep no boats here? That's so no towns-person sets off into the lake and gets themselves hurt, or worse. Trust me, you never want to cross this ocean."
John looked down at the water. "This may not be safe, but we need time. We can't fly over the sea because Teo is exhausted, and Moshi would decline to take us over in her own dragon form. Walking isn't an option, we don't' have time for it. It looks as though the only way across is by a ship. But if they don't have one, then where do we get-"
"AH, look!" another fisherman shouted.
John looked back up and saw a huge schooner-looking ship coming from the horizon.
"Oh dear, no!" the fisherman shouted. He dropped his line which slid into the water and reached for his bucket of fish.
John looked a little worried. "...what's going on?"
"Have you learned nothing, boy?!" the fisherman shouted. "It's pirates! They be commin' to attack Oceanside! All folks got to head for shelter!"
The fishermen began to run away from the docks, as kids playing in the yards where grabbed by adults and brought into houses. John slowly began to walk when a siren rang through the town.
"Attention! Pirates are coming! This isn't a test, take shelter, hide your good, hurry!" came a voice over the loudspeaker.
John gulped and slowly began his run back toward the resort.
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The fight for the food had finally eased up to an end.
"...hey, has anyone seen Leo?" Enrique asked.
"Hmmm..." Lava said.
Everyone turned to him, with both hands over his mouth.
"Where's Leo?" Yoshee asked.
Lava shrugged, and kept his hands over his mouth.
Moshi's gave a sigh. "Open your mouth."
Lava sighed, and opened up his mouth, allowing Leoshi to tumble out.
The second he landed, he gave a loud deep breath, of both shock and disgust. Leoshi slowly got to his feet. "...what was that for?"
"Sorry, I thought you where cheese." Lava said, with a small smile.
Leoshi looked ready to say something, but was interrupted by the sound of an alarm.
"Attention! Pirates are coming! This isn't a test, take shelter, hide your good, hurry!"
"Pirate?" Yoshifrog asked.
"That doesn't sound good." Yapi said. "Should we hide?"
"Yes, let's go." Yin said, closing up her book and getting up.
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John reached the resort at last. He reached the the handle and gave it a tug. It was locked, apparently to protect them from the incoming pirates.
He gave a gasp and looked toward the docks. The huge pirate ship was now docked there, and a series of people, too far away to see clearly, where running from there up the streets in a loud shouting.
John began to run, farther and farther, banging on every building. "I'm not a pirate, help!"
He looked back again and saw them rushing up, coming ever closer.
"Hey look, it's a kid!" he heard a voice said from the incoming group. "Get 'em!"
John gave a shout, and continued running. About three of the pirates where off after him, shouted and saying something incoherently.
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The rest of the group had hidden themselves in a corner in the courtyard. There was a foreboding and ominous silence for about ten seconds.
Then it began, glass could be heard shattering inside the lobby, things being thrown about and wrecked.
"The place is being destroyed!" Yapi gasped.
"My beautiful resort!" a nearby man shouted, before fainting and falling backward into the pool.
"This looks like it may be the end for Flor Majestuosa." a nearby guest shouted.
The smashing continued within the resort.
"I think we'll be safe if we all just stay here."
Suddenly, Leo gasped. "John's somewhere in the city, and Teo's still inside!"
"There's somebody in there?!" another person shouted. "They don't stand a chance!"
"He's already hurt, so he can't defend himself." Moshi added in. "Just thought you should know."
"We got to do something!" Lava shouted.
"Well, talking will not help! Come on!" Yoshifrog shouted.
With that, the group took off into the resort, unaware of what to expect next.
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What's next? Action, action, and more action.
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Midnight
Yoshi
I am The Lizard King. I can do anything.
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Post by Midnight on Feb 5, 2006 12:24:57 GMT -5
Shweet!This thing is really making progress. ^_^
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Post by Enrique on Feb 5, 2006 12:28:22 GMT -5
You did a great job of employing suspence at the end of this part, like always. Keep it up!
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Post by Leoshi on Feb 5, 2006 13:55:11 GMT -5
Thanks. I'll be getting the next part up soon. I just need to think of a way to write it
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Feb 5, 2006 16:12:14 GMT -5
Haha, sweet beginning to this arc. I was gone for the weekend, and I got to come home to this ^^ Keep it up, Leo!
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Post by Yin on Feb 5, 2006 19:17:04 GMT -5
Sorry for not post here, had to do a science report last week. First ninjas and now pirates... my two favorite things. This should get interesting, Yin IS a ninja and a pirate just to let you know. Keep it up Leo!
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Feb 6, 2006 8:43:31 GMT -5
Was I really that stupid to think you were an edible? Ouch, sorry. Anyways, yayness! Do the suspense dance! ;D
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