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Post by Teo on Dec 11, 2005 4:35:16 GMT -5
WOOHOO!! This is one WICKED story! If only I visited fanfics more often! Say...there wouldn't happen to be one more spot in this story, would there? I'll keep my list of details short... Theodore (more of the time reffered as 'Teo') is a person with the ability to shapeshift between three things, human, yoshi, and dragon. Unfortunately, clothes don't shapeshift with...so he hasn't been a human for a while. As a yoshi, he's light blue...for this story and as to not get messed up as someone else, wears a white short sleeve shirt. As a dragon, he's entirely silver and maybe about the size of a bus and a half. Great if you happen to need a lift to a far-away temple on another continent . I'll keep reading these stories just as much! You are an absolutely splendid writer.
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Post by moshi5694 on Dec 11, 2005 7:27:12 GMT -5
Cool, but I still don't trust Moshi here... BWAHAHAHAHA!!! Watch....I'll probaly do my own orders or just maim the guy. XD This is getting interesting...
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 11, 2005 8:43:17 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliments. And sure I have a spot left, Teo. It's still not too late for others to join as well. Like I said, I'm still trying to expand my cast. It may not be in the next chapter, but I'll incorperate you.)
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Post by Enrique on Dec 11, 2005 9:50:49 GMT -5
I'm starting the "revoluciĆ³n" against the prinicipal! I shall overthrow the school government, then party for the remainder of the school year! XD I'll revoke your expulsion as well, Leo.
*bricked*
Another great chapter, Leo!
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Post by Teo on Dec 11, 2005 15:57:49 GMT -5
Thanks Leo! This is a real interesting story, and now let's help Enrique overthrow the school!! *Bricked*.
I wonder what'll happen next...let's hope there's not another writers block...not that you would want to do 50 chapters per hour.
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Dec 11, 2005 18:07:44 GMT -5
Great job on this chapter, Leo! I smell... something tasty. XD Keep it up, but don't rush yourself too much ^^.
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Post by Yapi on Dec 12, 2005 16:56:37 GMT -5
OMG!! i spended a whole hour reading it, but it is great as always Leo, i love it!! ;D keep going ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 12, 2005 18:58:51 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm glad you liked that one too. Wow AB, an hour? I can't believe I've written that much already. Okay, here's my next part:
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Moshi sneered as she separated. "Enrique thinks he can control me. ...but still, I can't have anyone interfere in my little "plan."
As she thought, she walked out of the door, the kicked off into the air and began to fly.
"That one must hold many-of-secrets." Moshi thought as she scanned the schoolyards from the air.
Not long afterwords, she spotted the doors open up. The principal was walking outward, grumbling about something...
Johnyoshi kept his eye on the principal as he walked from the door. All the while, he remained serious, standing behind a corner.
"I just have to wait for it..." he thought.
The principal walked on past, then proceeded for his car. John waited as the door shut, and the motor started up.
That was his cue. Remaining hidden, he began to rush away. The car pulled out of it's spot and began to slowly drive from the parking lot toward the city streets. The principal gave a look out into the streets to see if any other cars where coming, then drove into the streets and increased his velocity away from the school.
Suddenly, from behind the corner, another wheeled vehicle sped off. It was John sitting on the bicycle. He switched gears, then sped off after the car...
"This must be my cue." Moshi thought. She took a higher altitude and flew off in pursuit of the car, unaware of John's bicycle...
John's speed increased as the car pulled out into traffic. "He's taking main street. I may be able to make time if I take a shortcut."
Johnyoshi took a sudden swerve off the road and into a construction site.
He began to petal harder battling a rather bumpy pathway leading into the heart of an unfinished building.
He kicked as hard as he could as he made a quick swerve to the left to avoid hitting a pole, then to the right to avoid a crane. He completely ignored the workers shouting at him and drove through a maze of beams and wires. It became a battle of reflexes, avoiding high voltage wires, and missing all sorts of intimidating machines by mere inches...
Moshi found herself in her own predicament. If she flew too high, she would be spotted, so she lowered to roof levels. She kept her eyes on the car as it drove.
Moshi's feet landed on the rooftops. Instantly, she took off running as fast as she could. It looked like a bad deal, because it drastically decreased her speed.
But suddenly, she found herself running right at the edge of a 30 story drop. And even worse, the car was driving into a tunnel.
Moshi didn't stop. "I've come too far to quit now, I will catch him!"
With that, she made a bold leap off the side of the building. She began to dive-bomb right for the city streets below. With seconds to spare, she spread her dark wings and tilted. Her body came within inches of hitting the ground.
Proud of her recovery, she decided to fly right into the tunnel. As she flew in, she realized the space was unfortunately narrow for flight. She found herself missing cars, trucks, lights, and many other obstacles. At last, she saw the light at the end, and flew back into daylight.
She was within 20 meters of the car and closing in. All the while, remaining hidden and watching the principal's every move...
John finally escaped the site, only to find another contrucion site. Only this one was much more direct toward his mission. He was headed for a half built bridge.
But with a man who's powers where unknown and motives evil, he would not turn back and quit. Instead, he kicked gear all the way up, and sped as fast as his legs could move. The tension building within himself, he was beginning to feel terrified, but knew he had no choice now.
Then silence. The bike flew off the side and had become airborne. All he could hear was the wheels spinning in the air, and his heartbeat. It was all in slow motion...
He felt himself breathing quite heavily. The bike began to loose altitude. As he watched, he saw the other side coming closer... and ever so closer...
"I'm gonna make it!" he thought. I"m gonna-"
But suddenly, the drop became faster. Too fast, as he missed the other side. He looked down and saw himself plunging toward a river.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
The rest of his shouted as cut off as his bike made contact with the water. He felt himself fall into the cold, murky water. Seconds later, he and the bike flew back out, the gears spinning rapidly.
He managed to get himself back on the streets. Now, soaked and cold, he continued to chase the car...
Moshi gave a sigh of relief, as the car slowly came to a stop at a building. It was a hotel, and a rather fancy one at that. She watched from the skies as the principal stepped from his car and walked inside.
"I got you now." she thought. Moshi landed on the sidewalk, then proceeded inside...
Johnyoshi continued to pedal until he spotted the principal's car, stopped at the side of a hotel. She slammed the brakes and came to a halt on the sidewalk. Without bothering to fix up the bike, or to dry off, he dropped the bike by the door and rushed inside.
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Yup, that's what I got for now
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Post by Enrique on Dec 12, 2005 21:35:21 GMT -5
Ooh... I wonder what's going to happen next! Another great chapter, Leo!
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Post by Yapi on Dec 12, 2005 21:49:10 GMT -5
wow, must-keep-reading. awesome job Leo, i love it ;D
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 12, 2005 22:00:13 GMT -5
Thanks! Hey, AB, if you may or may not have noticed, I'm trying to increase my cast, so do you want to be in this as well (Others are still welcome as well)?
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Post by Yapi on Dec 12, 2005 22:23:24 GMT -5
of course, it will be a pleasure ;D
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Dec 12, 2005 22:40:19 GMT -5
Whee, he fell in the river! XD Great job with describing the scenery in this chapter, keep it up! This is really great, Leo! ^^
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Post by Teo on Dec 13, 2005 0:09:08 GMT -5
That was great! I don't know how to state this any other way, but that was a really good chapter! I entirely saw it in my mind, and it looked action packed...
You really know how to make a good story!
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 13, 2005 8:14:10 GMT -5
Mama mia!! Don't give up, us! Man, I'm absorbed into that fan-fic! ;D
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 13, 2005 15:18:11 GMT -5
Thanks! Here I am with the next part:
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Yoshifrog finally found the opportunity, now that the principal had left his office. She tip-toed to the doorway. Giving one last glance to make sure no one was watching, she quickly rushed through the doorway, unintentionally slamming it shut.
She crept through the room, past a bookshelf and the broken window. She found his desk in the middle of the office. It consisted of papers, a computer, and the phone.
Yoshifrog sat down at the desk, and flipped the switch on the computer. It gave a few beeps as it came to life, lights turning on, the screen showing a loading bar. As she waited, she looked toward the papers and began to sift through them.
Knock Knock!
Yoshifrog frantically turned and saw the door handle turning. She gave a panicked "Eek!" and jumped underneath the desk.
The door opened, and someone else walked in.
"Hello? Mr. Principal?"
Yoshifrog recognized the voice, belonging to Yapi. She was known quite well around the school as being the cheerful one.
"Helloooooo?" Yapi asked. "Guess he's not here."
Yoshifrog looked up from a crack in the desk to watch.
"Oh well." Yapi said. She turned to walk toward the doors, but suddenly turned back. Yapi found herself starring at two eyes from behind the desk.
"Shoot!" Yoshifrog thought.
"Is that desk starring at me?" Yapi asked. "Uh... hello?"
Yoshifrog sighed and crawled out from underneath.
"What the-"
"I can explain!" Yoshifrog shouted.
Yapi raised an eyebrow. "...Yeah..."
"Really, I was just-"
"No need to say it, you where snooping around the office." Yapi said.
Yoshifrog sighed. "...fine, I admit it."
"But now that you mention it, it always seems like that guy has something to hide anyway." Yapi said.
Yoshifrog smiled. "So, you won't say anything?"
"Relax." Yapi said with a smile. "So, what are you looking for anyway?"
Yoshifrog's smile faded. "Well... it's kind of a secret."
"...oh. Okay." Yapi stated. "...maybe I should come back later."
"Uh, it's okay." Yoshifrog said back. She turned around and saw the computer fully finished loading. She turned back and sat down at the desk.
"Are you hacking into the school's computer systems?" Yapi asked.
"Well..." Yoshifrog stopped herself. "...wait, what's this?"
As it opened, a file, marked "Book" was placed on the desktop.
Yoshifrog clicked on it, and it opened. A window popped up, with all sorts of documents on it.
"...what is that?" Yapi asked, pointing to an icon that looked like the book.
"...no way." Yoshifrog said. She reached for the phone...
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Lava continued to walk around the school campus. As he did, he heard a beeping sound. Lava instinctively reached into a shirt pocket and pulled out a cell phone.
"Lava here." he responded.
"Lava?" Yoshifrog's voice greeted him. "I have found a big file about the book."
"What's on it?" Lava asked.
"Is that a book?" Lava heard another voice on the other end of the line.
"Yoshifrog, who is that?" Lava asked.
"Yapi's in here with me." Yoshifrog said.
"Oh great." he sighed. "Does she know too?"
"Not yet. Anyway, it says there's something hidden in the school, on the east wall outside." Yoshifrog said.
"Try to keep it a secret. The last thing we need is to involve more people." Lava said.
"I'll try, but I think Yapi's too smart to hide a secret from." Yoshifrog stated. With that, the receiver hung up, followed by a dial tone.
Lava placed his phone away and sighed. "This is getting weird. A secret on the wall?"
"What secret?" Another voice asked. Lava turned around quickly. There was another Yoshi standing aside him.
"Nothing's going on, Teo!" Lava shouted back.
"Yeah sure." Teo said sarcastically. "Seriously, though. What is it?"
"None of your business." Lava said. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have an east wall to go to."
"That was easier then I thought." Teo thought. He ran ahead of Lava, giving a chuckle.
"Hey, don't!" Lava shouted.
Teo beat him to the side of the building. "So, what's here?"
"Nothing!" Lava said, annoyed.
Teo gave a smile. "I won't tell anyone, but if it's bad or something, then I want to know."
"...you swear not to tell anyone else?" Lava asked.
Teo nodded. "So what is this big secret?"
Lava sighed. "It's a long story..."
He gave an explanation of everything that had occurred.
"...oh. Who'd have thunk that the principal was evil?" Teo asked.
"How could you have not thought that?" Lava asked.
"...yeah, good point." Teo said.
"So help me search this wall." Lava said.
"...fine." Teo said.
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I'm ended this part here. I tried to incorporate the two new cast members as well. Not as action packed as the last one, but expect things to be full of action soon.
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Post by Yapi on Dec 13, 2005 15:33:37 GMT -5
thank for including me leo!!!
that fanfic is just awesome!! love it, keep going!!!
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Post by Yin on Dec 13, 2005 16:23:09 GMT -5
Whoop! This is the coolest fan fic ever! Just like Yapi said, keep going!
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 13, 2005 17:05:03 GMT -5
Ooooh!! Mario's tine started to spingle when Suigi was trying to cast a spell in Universal Reset Button Saga. My tine is spingling just reading all this! ;D Grrr, sneaky Teo...
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Post by Enrique on Dec 13, 2005 18:10:34 GMT -5
Another good chapter, Leo! The suspence is really mounting in...
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