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Post by Teo on Dec 14, 2005 0:22:36 GMT -5
I make my appearance You made a whole chapter to build suspence? Where's it going to spill out?? At one chapter a day, I'll tune in tommorrow, I don't want to miss any of this! Even if it's not one a day, everyone needs a break every so often!
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 14, 2005 15:27:41 GMT -5
I'll tune in tommorrow, I don't want to miss any of this! Even if it's not one a day, everyone needs a break every so often! I'm trying to work as fast as I can, so I' probably won't take a break, not with all of this new stuff I want to post. Anyway, here's my next part: --------------------------------------------- Yoshee opened back the doorway to her dormitory. She closed it again and sat down on her bed. "What am I supposed to do? Look for some clues?"She gave a sigh as she looked about the room. "This'd be so much easier if I had Champ here. But no, school policy said I couldn't. It's a shame."She gave another sigh. With that, she got back up. "Lesse..." She paced around the room. "...but where do I find stuff?" As she paced around the room, she looked at a bulletin board with letters posted on the wall. "Let's see... there isn't much going on. The principal did schedule a school meeting in the cafeteria next Monday, but that's all he's been doing..."But then she began to wonder about it. "Wait... what if he has something else planned for that meeting?"She rubbered her head. "...well, I'm not going to solve anything by just standing here."She got back up and walked out of her dorm. As she closed her door, she caught sight of Enrique walking down the hallways. "Find anything?" Enrique asked. "Nope." She replied. "And you?" "Same. I don't understand. How could he be hiding so much?" "Don't know." Yoshee said. She and Enrique walked back into her dormitory. She sat at a chair and picked up a phone. It gave a few rings after she dialed. "Hello?" Leoshi's voice answered. "Hey, Leo! It's me." Yoshee said. "Did you uncover anything?" Leoshi asked. "Not yet." Yoshee responded. "Well could you meet me in my dormitory? I have something I want to show you." "Sure." Yoshee said. "You are not going anywhere." a new voice said. Yoshee and Enrique turned around, and saw some other students standing at the doorway. "Yoshee? What's going on?" Leoshi's voice asked over the phone. "Who do you guys think you are, just randomly walking into my dorm?" Yoshee asked defensively. "Word in school is you guys skipped." one of the students replied. "What's it to ya?" Yoshee replied. "You are obviously up to some prank or something, and we want in." he said back. "Sorry, it's invitation only." Enrique stated. "Now if you don't mind-" "You look'n for a fight?" the student asked. "We don't have time for it!" Yoshee replied. "Yoshee? What's going on? Hello?" Leoshi's questions remained unanswered as the phone dangled from it's receiver. "If you don't tell us, we'll tell everyone that you're up to something. Then you'll get expelled just like that pathetic looser Leoshi." the student said, quite mischievously. The three students paraded into the dorm. "Hey!" Yoshee shouted. "What are you-" As one of the students walked in, they pushed aside a table, thus pulled the phone from the wire... --------------------------------- Leoshi looked back to the phone, hearing nothing but a dial tone. "What's going on?" Yin asked him. "I lost their connection..." Leoshi said. "We must go back and find out what is going on." Yin said. -------------------------------- Yin and Leo rushed down the corridors. Yin beat him to the doorway, and opened it up. Her uncovered eye widened. "Whoa!" As Leoshi caught up, he saw it: The room was a mess, a table and phone thrown on the floor. No one was inside, but it looked like something big had just occurred. Yin continued to look around. "What the-" Leoshi sighed. "Someone got them, while looking for the book. We have to call the others, then go find them." -------------------------------------- That's it for now. I'll be back with more soon.
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Post by moshi5694 on Dec 14, 2005 15:29:46 GMT -5
W00000000!!! These stories keep on gettin' better and better.
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Post by Enrique on Dec 14, 2005 16:08:25 GMT -5
Please don't beat me up... XD
Great suspence, Leo! Keep it up!
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Post by Yin on Dec 14, 2005 16:12:33 GMT -5
Oh my! This is getting very suspenceful, I can't wait to find out what next!
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Post by UMS Author Lava on Dec 14, 2005 16:23:13 GMT -5
Accursed seniors!!! I might've guessed they were bad guys as well! As such, it's a masterpiece. I hope Teo is useful...
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Post by Teo on Dec 14, 2005 16:27:40 GMT -5
So much suspense... Enough with suspense though, I wonder if Yoshee's dorm happens to be on the other side of the east wall? Meheh...make it go boom!
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Post by Lord of the Dance on Dec 14, 2005 22:31:54 GMT -5
AAAGH!!! FIGHT!!! XD Great job with the suspence, I love it! Keep it up, Leo, this is great! ^_^
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Post by Yapi on Dec 14, 2005 23:03:52 GMT -5
o my!! I love ti ;D it is wonderfull!!! suspense ught, i can't hold it
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 15, 2005 20:00:56 GMT -5
Thank you very much, I'm trying to keep the suspense going here. But for now, some relief:
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"So, how do we search this wall?" Lava asked.
"I got an idea." Teo said. "...Stand back."
Lava raised an eyebrow. "Why?"
"Trust me." Teo said. Lava shrugged and took a few steps backward.
Teo looked back at the wall. Suddenly, he stood in a battle position.
"Are you kidding?" Lava said. He looked like he was holding back laugher. "You think you can knock down a brick wall with your bare hands?"
Teo smirked. "Just watch."
Suddenly, Lava saw Teo's form begin to change, becoming larger, stronger, more majestic.
"What?" Lava asked. "Dude!"
Teo had transformed himself. He now stood very tall, length being that of at least a bus long. Large wings formed on his back, and his tail length drastically increased. He head now altered, eyes turned to yellow. Teo was now a huge dragon. The dragon raised it's mighty tail and slammed it into the wall.
Lava shielded himself from the dust. "...are you crazy?! You just blew a hole in the school!"
Teo's dragon form backed away. He quickly transformed back to a yoshi, with a content expression.
"How are we supposed to examine the wall now!? You just blew it up!!" Lava shouted.
"Lava, look at the building and tell me what you see." Teo stated.
"A big hole in the wall!!" Lava repeated. He looked in and then calmed down.
"Wait." Lava said. "...what?"
From the hole, they where peering at a large vault door.
"Jackpot." Lava said. He reached for his phone.
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The phone began to ring. Yapi picked it up. "Hello?"
"Is Yoshifrog there? Put her on the line!" Lava said.
"Yeah, she's here." Yapi said, handing Yoshifrog the phone. "Yup?" Yoshifrog asked.
"We found a vault behind the wall." Lava said. "But how do we open it. We need a code."
"There's a file on the computer that's password protected, I can't open it. I'll bet the code's in there." Yoshifrog said.
"Well, try to figure it out." Lava said. "I'll bet something real important is in that thing."
"Yeah, hold your horses." Yoshifrog said. "Now lesse... what's the password?"
"A password for the Principal?" Yapi asked. "Try Jerk."
Yoshifrog shrugged and typed it in. Suddenly, the computer beeped.
"No way." Yoshifrog said. "Jerk was his password?"
"Figures." Lava said.
"Why are you hacking into the system again?" Yapi asked.
"It's a long story." Yoshifrog said. "Okay, Lava. The code is, 64, 87, 14."
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"Got it." Lava said. He walked up to the vault and began to type the numbers. The doorway beeped, accepting the password. The giant door opened up. Teo raised an eyebrow as it did.
"That's it?" Teo asked.
They both saw nothing but a single sheet of paper within the vault. Teo walked up to it. The writing was done in pencil, but the strange marked looked like another language.
"Well, that's helpful." Teo said sarcastically.
Just then, a new voice interrupted the phone call.
"We have a problem." Leo was the one who called.
"Leo? Is something wrong?" Yoshifrog asked.
"Yes." Leoshi said. "Enrique and Yoshee are both in serious trouble. We must go find them at once. Meet me and Yin outside the school entrance."
"Got it." Lava said, hanging up his phone.
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Yoshifrog put away the phone as she logged off the computer.
"Yoshifrog? Can you explain what the heck's going on?" Yapi asked.
"I'll explain on the way." Yoshifrog said. She rushed out of the office. Yapi shrugged and ran after.
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Shorter compared to the others, but that's all I could think of for now.
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Post by Enrique on Dec 15, 2005 20:07:46 GMT -5
The suspence is killing me! Keep it up, Leo!
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Post by Teo on Dec 15, 2005 20:12:32 GMT -5
Wowza, I really liked this chapter (and it's not only because I get some action )! In fact, I'm gonna read it again... I hope Yoshee and Enrique are alright.
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Post by Yin on Dec 15, 2005 20:24:41 GMT -5
Whoop! Nice chapter, you're getting intense with the suspense!
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 15, 2005 20:27:18 GMT -5
Really, you liked that one. I thought it would be too short and boring. Well, okay, thanks. I'll try to think up of more soon. If I can figure out what I want to say next, I'll type it before I go to bed tonight
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Post by Yin on Dec 15, 2005 20:32:02 GMT -5
Just don't take it too hard, your story is really good all and all, and strangely I been having and urge to make a manga version of this.
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Post by Teo on Dec 15, 2005 20:32:28 GMT -5
Don't forget to study for your mid-terms. We can spare a chapter if it means you'll pass your mid-terms.
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 15, 2005 20:37:30 GMT -5
Don't worry about the mid-terms, they aren;t until the end of vacation. I do have some other tests to finnish, but I can type very quickly, and I have already studied for 2 hours today. Thanks for your concern, though.
A Magna, Yin? Sweet. Do whatever you want, that'd be cool
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Post by Yapi on Dec 15, 2005 20:39:09 GMT -5
MUST-KEEP-READING!!!!!! ohhohohohohohohohohohohohoh WONDERFULL FIC n__n
it is a really good idea of the manga, i can help, i know how to draw anime style ;D
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Post by Yin on Dec 15, 2005 20:45:15 GMT -5
I been drawing it on paper, I drafted the few first pages. I think I'll have to merge two chapters in the manga so that might happen.
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Post by Leoshi on Dec 15, 2005 21:29:00 GMT -5
You have? Who long have you been doing it? ...that's awesome! Nice, and if your interested Yapi, you can do whatever you so please as well. So, here we are with yet another part:
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Moshi crept quietly in the corridors on the hotel. She managed to spot the principal walk into an elevator. She stood and watched the floor indicator... 87.
"Hm..." Moshi said. "That's far up. What is that man up to?"
She stepped into an elevator and pressed a button. As she did, gave a rather mischievous smile. The doors shut, and she was on her way...
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Johnyoshi was stopped at the lobby.
"I don't have time for this." Johnyoshi said.
"It's policy, kid. You can't get in because you are soaking wet." the manager said.
"I have a pocket full of cold hard cash." Johnyoshi said. He reached into his pocket and waved a few bills in front of the manager. His face instantly changed.
"Well... welcome to our hotel, kid. Do you want a towel?" the manager asked.
"Perhaps later." John said. "Um... would you have seen some mean looking person enter recently?"
"Oh yes, there was the principal of a boarding school in here. Came to ask where an occupant was staying." the manager said.
"Can you tell me where?" John asked.
"I'm sorry, but we can't reveal personal info about our occupants." the manager said.
John gave a smile and held out the bills again.
"87th floor, room 128." the manager said. "Enjoy your stay here."
John nodded, and placed the bills on the counter before walking toward the elevators. The manager picked up the bills to count them. The manager instantly let them go after noticing they where soaked. He grimaced as the looks at the soggy bills.
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Moshi found herself on the floor. She saw the Principal walking down the corridors. Moshi crept on the sides of the walls, trying to follow without being noticed. She saw him enter a room.
"Bingo." Moshi stated. She walked toward the room.
Suddenly, she came to an unexpected halt as she collided with something. She looked and saw John standing right beside her. They both gasped at the same time.
"What are you doing here!?" they both asked. Their eyes widened. "What am I doing here?!" they asked.
Moshi sighed. "I followed the Principal to this room... why are you soaking wet?"
"Long story." John groaned.
Moshi remembered her objective, then looked through the keyhole. She saw the Principal talking with some robed people in a candlelit room.
"I swear boss, I tried to get 'em. But that Leo and the kid escaped the roof before we could blow 'em up." one of them said.
"I should have you fired for inadequacy." the Principal said.
"Please, give us another chance. We'll do whatever it takes to get the book for you."
"Yes, but we must get the book. If I can get my hands on it before the... dark one gets it, I can control the world at last." the principal said.
"Figures he's after world domination." Moshi said.
John sighed.
Suddenly, there was a musical beeping sound. Moshi gasped, and began to search her pockets rapidly.
"Moshi, turn it off!" John whispered.
"I'm trying!" Moshi said. She reached into her last pocket and pulled out a cell phone that was ringing a song. She pressed a button.
"This better be good." Moshi said.
"It's very important." Leo's voice responded. "Enrique and Yoshi have both been kidnapped."
"What?" John asked, able to hear the conversation from where he stood.
"Can you meet us in-front of the school?" Leo asked.
"Leo, I'm kinda in the middle of spying in the principal." Moshi said.
"Are they with him?" Leo asked.
"Nope." Moshi responded.
"Strange. Someone other then the Principal is responsible for this?" Leo asked. Suddenly, he gasped on the other line. "Wait, I think I may know who did this!"
"John and I are staying here. We'll keep you posted." Moshi said. She hung up the phone.
At the same time, the door opened up. They both looked up to see the principal starring right at them.
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And that's it for tonight
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